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@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Especially when the main character gets thrown into it, dirtying her hands in it and barely escaping the remnants of it later.

You are right on that one.
War is the hardest genre to write in my opinion.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
TBH, I don't know. The war in it is hard to grasp, even for me, and I know a war cannot be condensed -- or, at least in my opinion.

I have to ask, how many chapters till Anarchy is completed?

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
You're fine. I didn't explain myself well enough. C:

@ Machete
My mistake then. You should do that after the story is finished or if you don't like the way it's going.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Add new parts, take out the old-- Essentially redo the entire chapter.

Whne you say edit, you mean add new parts and all that or just edit the wiritng mistakes?
I'm saying to edit the writing mistakes if there are any.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
I don't know if I should this early in the story-- I've edited the story three times already.

You should edit it now cause many give up on stpries cause of writing mistakes.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
I guess C: I'm thinking about doing it when I have Anarchy past chapter 20.

Well, sinc eyou are good at editing, do it when you have time.

@ namewasalreadytaken
She decided to go away for a while x.x

And freestyle kills me because when I need air, my arm is being pulled down and I'm left to flail x.x

Your new superpower is prorities.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Anarchy.

@ Machete
Come on, 20 laps isn't so hard, where did the you who can dance for an hour straight go~
xD lol

oh yes.

About which story are you talking about?

@ namewasalreadytaken
So, tomorrow is the big swimming test.
And I have to do 20+ laps.

I nearly died during the 10th lap today D:

Pfft, out of the both of us, you have the priorities straight xD

@ Machete

See, It's over soon. lol xD

Of course, of course. xD

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
I can't help but feel but Chapter 1 thru 5 need heavy editing..

@ namewasalreadytaken

I'm still taking swimming, and it's going to end soon (Friday.. dear god, the freestyle damn near killed me today)

Oh yes, the priorities are all straight. xD *Rises from the dead*