thank you so much for your comment! i must admit it came as a bit of a shock as i haven't had anything to do with writing at all since i posted it, so the fact you said such lovely things means a lot; thank you!!
It really means a lot to me when people enjoy my work and tell me
I was actually intending for the air of the story to be more serious and articulate than it turned out, but I really like how it ended up. It seemed real and I like it like that. I hope you enjoy the rest!