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haha i hear ya. but thank you! i'm actually gonna be updating it in a few minutes; i'm just answering everyone's comments now, and then i'll be posting it :)

Yeah, I'll get to it :)

And what is the problem that needs to be fixed?

I would love to help! How can I help you?

Also, I had a John O'Callaghan story you read... I am now re-writing it but I'm also making it a harry styles fiction. I remember you're not a fan of that but if you want to give it a shot, you could? Haha :)

Hi, I have a contest up and I thought you might be interested.

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aww haha why don't teachers like you?? my teachers never disliked me exactly, but a lot of them definitely thought i had issues lol but i definitely suggest taking literature classes too! if you like creative writing, obviously a creative writing class is gonna be the most beneficial, but at the same time, exposing yourself to new things can always spark new ideas; so reading more can always help your creative writing too :)

thank you for your comment on the edge of your seat! i really appreciate that :) and i've never read the virgin suicides, but i saw the movie, and it was amazing! i don't usually write in first person plural point-of-view, but oddly enough, my creative writing teacher in high school told me i should read it cause he thought i would enjoy the plot. i'll never forget his words; "i really think you'll like it. it's twisted...a lot like you." and it was the funniest thing cause then he was like saying he meant my writing style, but it was just hilarious haha i'll have to take a look at it now! :)

That's awesome that you picture Laci just like the picture I have. When I stumbled across that pic I was just like Yes, that's her! I guess the girl in the picture just looks like a Laci or something haha.

Thank you for commenting, it means a lot. I've just updated :)

@ lion eyes.
Yay.

No problem, I loved it

@ lion eyes.
Hopefully. Thank you again for checking it out, though.

hahaha, it's great.
Nah, people will read it

@ lion eyes.
I didn't do that, since I know John's a wonderful person, and both Joel and John are childhood friends.
Lol, I'll try writing down some inspiration today, then. How sweet of you!
At first I thought nobody read it because they thought it was in French.

Oh yeah, then that's great
Because usually when the girl's already dating one of the guys that ones an asshole and I hate when people do that :D

kjdfslkgfdlkgdfjl I really can't wait for another update

@ lion eyes.
Em, like have Joel think he isn't worth her even if he's the 'best' kind of boyfriend? Like that?
Because I never intended on showing John as a Mr. Grinch, lol.
Joel's just soppy because he likes her way too much, and John's the one who got her instead.

I'm actually jealous of that story :D
That was so great!

But just a suggestion, maybe you should actually let John be nice :o but have Joel think he's doesn't deserve her? Or is that what you were planning on, probably if they've been together for two years
I LOVE THE DAMN STORY. :D

@ lion eyes.
Aw, you lovely person!

Wow. I'm so impressed... wow!

@ lion eyes.
I finished Bedroom Hymns. I hope it makes people cry, lol.
I put too much into it.