May 23rd, 2013 at 10:07am
bahhhh thank you for your comment I'm so glad you like it!
I've always had trouble with boy characters too, since fanfiction can often favor the female perspective...and also because I'm not a boy lol. Leila was a hard one too, though, because I feel like she's just so sad and kinda empty, a lot of times I felt like she came across as having no personality.
But yay I'm so happy you like it!
No Leila is amazing! Even though she's so empty she still screams with this over powering personality that just drags you in with her. I'm just in love with her character and how you wrote her thoughts and her movements. It's like everything is so carefully thought out and perfect like her dancing.
Sorry for gushing I can't help it. Haha.
Erin!