I'm relatively new to mibba well maybe new is no longer a good word.... But I'm not getting many comments. I mean yeah I'm getting them but I am not liking them... Soooooo comment on my work? I'll be sure to return the favor. ^.^All I get is criticism on my "overuse" of dialogue and how badly my characters are portrayed. Then again that id also my compliments so please if something else could be...

So I go to one of my stories, "A Christmas Short story," with an intent to edit it. I see two readers for my first chapter and one for my third. Like what is that? Okay, the one person who stopped after the first chapter I get it it was kinda boring and I respect that you stopped reading, but why, to the person who went to the third chapter. Just why? I would of gotten it if you just stopped....