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  • maplel34fs

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    Thank you so much :D. Happy New Year!
    December 27th, 2013 at 04:28pm
  • spirit44

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    I just want you to know how much I love Colton and Mia's story. You are such a wonderful writer! As always, I am looking forward to the next update. Hope you have a great new year!
    December 27th, 2013 at 04:49am
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    Didn't get notified so this is a late reply, but as you can now see from Chapter 5, sadly he did not. He was completely drunk and lost in the club's atmosphere with all the single girls he hadn't danced with in over a year. I was trying to get my point across with how terrible and sickened he felt in Chapter 5. It broke my heart writing it..sigh.
    December 27th, 2013 at 04:43am
  • spirit44

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    Yes, I read it first. It is really good. I loved it! I see you changed the last paragraph in chapter 4 of Don't Fall Back. Does that mean he might realize what he is doing and stop?
    December 24th, 2013 at 08:19pm
  • maplel34fs

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    Thanks so much, glad you like Don't Fall Back :). Just curious, have you read the prequel (Insane Love)?
    December 24th, 2013 at 08:07pm
  • fangirl1999

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    Thanks for the recs!
    December 6th, 2013 at 05:28am
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    Thanks, that's a great compliment! I'm glad that you enjoyed reading about Gabe and Ally. I need to finish that story! I'm horrible about finishing stories, I never do, which you will find out if you read very many of them. If you like Giroux, you might want to check out that story next, it's called Second Chances.
    November 30th, 2013 at 08:56am
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    @ fangirl1999
    I loved the Toews story so much that I am reading all of the stories you have posted. I stayed up all night last night just to finish the story about Gabe and Ally. You do such a wonderful job writing! I am looking forward to more. :)
    November 30th, 2013 at 04:29am
  • fangirl1999

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    Thanks for commenting on my Toews story! I am working on the next chapter now. It takes a lot of time to write. Hopefully I can make some good progress though on this long weekend!
    November 30th, 2013 at 03:49am
  • gloryboxxx

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    I think that was definitely the lowest point Vicky could reach; let's hope she will get better now so we can move on to the sequel! :) thanks so much for reading and commenting <3

    the new chapter is up! :)
    October 28th, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • gloryboxxx

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    thanks so much for the feedback! I'll definitely be writing a sequel to Heartbeat Slowing Down! <3

    oh, and the next chapter is up! :D haha
    October 24th, 2013 at 01:23am
  • gloryboxxx

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    well, I guess I got the 25 comments, YAY! next chapter is already up :) thank you so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it <3
    October 22nd, 2013 at 06:49am