thanks for all the feedback BTW. i have excuses for everything you said lol(im filled with excuses. i will take your help and use it though. dont worry my excuses aren't a way to get out of doing it. ill do anything to make my writing better!)ok well about the capitalization, ive been using microsoft works for writing lately and so i have a lot less errors in that department. i will pay more attention to that next time i update though. your right and ive noticed it myself too. i think im going to go back and replace all of my chapter names with whatever lyrics touch my heart at the time. i love using lyrics in my stores(titles and what not). im kinda new here and dont know how to add a layout to my stories. i just learned how to add a layout to my profile last night. thanks for your help. im about to start writing another chapter and ill start paying more attention to capitalization. ill also work on my chapters and what not. thanks so much though. im a perfectionist and hopefully what you reccomended i do will put me at ease with my story. im sorry for my very lengthy comment. i had alot to say. well i hope all is well and i cant wait to read your next update.
-kristina
xx
hiya! my names kristina! ive just come across your Gaijin No More slash and i think ive fallen in love all over again(major slash addict here). cant wait for the next update! im like bouncing in my seat(im wayy too hyper for my own good and when mixed with soda, pancakes, and slash... disaster). well i just thought id write and tell you how much i love your slash. if you could be so kind as to read mine. i haven't had anyone comment me in some time now and sadly i feel as if im on the verge of abandoning my poor infant of a slash atory. well i hope to hear from you soon! :]
-kristina
xx
umm... hi?
I reccomended 'Gaijin no more' to my friend emily (below) a few days ago. and she's pretty much talked about nothing else since.
so could you please update soon? just to get her off my back... and of course, i'd LOVE to read a new chapter too x]
my friend reccomened gaijin more more to me yesterday, and i think i may self combust if you don't update soon! :) it's completely adorable, and i'm about ready to kidnap cody... :) it's a really great story, now stop reading this and go write more!
^.^ That makes me very happy to know that my comments can motivate you.
I just love commenting your stories, they are just sooo great and they deserve more than the comments they have.
I can't wait for the next update, I really am excited.
Whenever you can update is okay, I can't wait to leave another comment! =]
I need to start writing myself lol Hope you have a wonderful day.
Oh gosh, I'm sorry! I completly forgot about that XD Yes, that was me. We're a lot alike, strangly enough. I've been working on a lot of slash and I'll add them when my mibba stops being stupid and actually lets me post my stories. I'll pm you with my dream XD You never know, you might like one of my sub-concious ideas, and I wouldn't want to spoil it for your other readers if you do choose to use one.
I love slash too, but I think there are some down-sides to it too. You can get addicted to it, then you stop reading other stories. I'm trying hard to correct that problem but it's kinda hard. XD
...
Do we really need to talk about it? 0_o Since when does sex come up whilst in geography?