I realized something about your stories which you need to fix whenever you get the chance. You have some very big paragraphs, you need to space them out like I did with the summary in Flight K-35542. You might get reported otherwise, and that way its easier for the readers to read.
As long as you keep writing, you'll get better. If you check the first story I posted on here, it sucks big time. But I am very proud of my latest works.