Thanks for commenting on SALVATION IS NEAR. So sorry for the grammar mistakes, I'm already revising the chapters and gonna pay more attention as I upload the next chapters. Glad you like the story though. :D
thank you for taking the time out and reading it :) I've been trying to figure out how to make a good background for a few months now...hopefully i will be able to soon! thanks! :D happy readings!
I think a little more angst over it would be nice, but don't make it obvious what happened, I really liked the reveal about it when she told John c: You are an exceptional writer though, don't give up (:
Thank you for the honest comment on my story. No worries. I do understand that. ^_^ I can't force people to read something that they're not interested in. ^_^
Thank you for yet another comment! I love you a lot right now. I'm really happy that you commented in such detail, and told me which aspects of the story you liked: it really is amazing :')
thanks so much for commenting on my story!!! I'm so glad that I have a reader that hates them but likes the story!!! ahhhh! thanks so much! :-) next chapter should be up tomorrow!
i know absolutely nothing about horses. in fact, when i googled it, i did learn what a bridle was... o.O
that being said, i did some research and found lots of words like cob, Full sized, over sized? i dunno if that helps at all?
i also found these posts:
"normaly english bridles come in 4 sizes pony, cob, full and extra full. general guide my 12.2hh and 13.2hh ponies who are quite fine are in pony sizes. My arab is in a cob size, my 14hh connemara is in a custom made bridle but its mostly cob size with some full size parts, My 16hh tb has a full size with a cob size nosband on it because he has a long narrow face. My 14hh traditional cob is in an extra full but she has a big head"
and
"well it depends on the size of your horse. i don't think that you can actually measure your horses head. So you go under the Sizes: Pony, Cob, Full, or Warmblood. If you have a small small pony = pony. medium - large pony = Cob. large pony - medium horse = Full. Large horse = Warmblood. And once you buy it there are straps to adjust for a good fit. The halter size is the same size as the bridle."
hope i've helped haha xx
i read them! i have to say though, the new version of the first chapter is much better than the original in my opinion. i dont know why, i just enjoyed it more (: at least everythings back now though hey? x
Aha it was awesome anyways! Its annoying though even for me who doesnt post on here anymore. Good luck with rewriting and let me know when anything new is up? X
mibba has restored itself back to April 5th so i dunno if you replied or not, but the last chapter and the new KB story are gone. please tell me you backed them up? x