Thank you, I would completely adore that! I'll definitely comment on your stuff. I'm the same way; my story Inside The Fire has nearly 100 readers but only 19 comments. I'm just like...eh...
Thanks for the comment on We Both Go Down Together. The first one was a little too fast and it annoys me when I read stuff like that, then I ended up writing like that. So the second one is probably going to be rreeeeaaaalllly slow, lol