OH. Why, thank you so much! It's okay. In fact, I thought you were just giving me some constructive criticism, and no harm was done! It's all good, my friend. ^^
Yes, you're right. But I was just writing it that way because of the way the girl was supposed to view things. She's supposedly too blinded by judgments that harsh comments are all she ever remembers or something like that. But I guess I stretched the taffy too far.
yeah :) inspiration is defiantely key and ive lost that alot in my stories which end up being deleted unfortunately, but im trying to keep it going. usually what i do is just plan out what the story is basically about (ex: the royal affair - thats about a girl just coming back from an all girls academy of ettiquete, falling in love with a lord, but being forcede into an arranged marriage with royalty, then falling in love with the prince, but having an affair with the other guy....and a bunch of stuff in the middle) literally thats what i thought in my head the day i created it. it sucks being on writer block, thats an all too familiar feeling for me lol
lol wow thanks. um i havent been sure yet if there should be a sequel considering i already have about 4 or 3 stories out that need to be finished. i usually do one story at a time and i thought i could handle more than one. i lied to myself lol. also now that i look back at it and read it i feel so ashamed i even wrote it. everything about it was bad, the plot, the time period (which never even had stereos lol) so i may go back and re-write it, THEN make a sequel once i have finished my other two stories or so. at least one lol, but thank you, i will definately take it into consideration :D
Haha, Thanks, I'm glad you like my story! I can dream of that one day happening, and it gives me hope knowing that other people think the same <-Here's more corn for the world!
Hey, I will update tonight...because the content in Chapter 10....will be intense and I don't want my dad or little brother reading it as I write...so yeah :)