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no problem, love.

I'm Ashley, by the way.

Its been a long, long while.
How are you? :)

No problem! I'm Elizabeth. :) Nice to "meet" you. Haha

I'm kinda shitty today, how are you?

I'm doing great (:

Hey, I'm Austin (:
How are you?

Hey there, hi there, ho there.
I'm profile lurking.
Thought I'd say hi!

I dunno. Frank's post on the site was pretty bleak. 'They've gone their seperate ways' :/

Mikey's my favourite but Bob is just well...Bob.
I'm scared to see his replacement :(

i'm not impressed

Bob. Bryar. Has. Left. My. Chemical. Romance.

It's nice to know I haven't come in contact with a greedy bitch who just wants to keep Baby Sykes all to themselves :P

And dude, I feel guilty not commenting on your story as much as you comment mine. It's not just you either; I slack on commenting a lot as it is because I'm going through a phase where I'd much rather be writing than reading and commenting, but when I see that [i]you've[/i] updated, I get super happy and have to read it right away :)

hahaha, and it should have been "[/Kreeper moment]" :P

hahaha, well I'm only one year older than you according to the age by your avatar :P So really, I was 16 when I first came up with the idea, and I'd like to think that I've definitely improved from there. It wasn't a rude thing to say, it was actually kind of funny after you pointed it out though :)

I'm glad someone appreciated the rules and were able to recognize them in their own world. I love when I have the opportunity to, hopefully, get the reader to feel something in common with a certain part of the story, that way they can be more attached.

It felt weird even thinking about writing about how the guys had jobs. I almost forgot myself that they can't be in spandex and a cape saving the musical world 24/7. Now it shows that they really are just regular people.
Regular people that are just ultra ballsy.

I'm with you on being somewhat scared of Creeper Kean [i](Really want to label it "[b]Kreeper Kean[/b]" to fit perfectly)[/i] because I picture him in real life the same as you do, but I really just wanted to shy away from that since that's the fun in writing: you can do anything you want.
A pedo Matt was just more entertaining on this end.

aaaaawwww, Tom is just the greatest, yeah?
I hope you don't mind a polygamous marriage proposal, because I would love to marry him as well <3

Corey is becoming progressively like his idol, and I've been wanting to show it through subtle ways, and language was the next greatest guess. But, of course, Nicholls has noticed and is not too happy. Thank you so much for the compliments though!! Wow, I always turn into a tomato every time I read your feedback!!! :D

Even though it's almost over, I have other projects in store that will hopefully compensate. I've had so much fun creating it though, no doubt, and even more fun sharing it with people like yourself. I'm glad you like it.

And also, as I sidenote, I noticed that you updated [i]The Missing O[/i], and no worries my friend, I plan to comment on that genius most likely tomorrow because I'm on the edge right now since my mother hasn't sent me to bed yet haha.

well that's nice
I like to go see bands

lol
it cant be that bad

where are you?

haha so totally badass
well I'm stuck in my house cuz there's like 28" of snow
I hate it!

your welcome xD
so wats up?

Glad to know that I maintain the humor without actually writing a chapter :P
and honestly, I love the stalking, "[i]desperately-needs-to-get-a-life lunatic[/i]" look, because if I'm worthy enough to have that, then that must mean that this story is pretty good haha.

Your praise is everything I need, honestly. Along with a few others, the ones who continue to comment, and I'm quite content that way :)

And flappy-armed stories really are the best. It's so awesome when you find one that truly excites you, and you shit bricks when you see that they've updated. You want to see what's happened "[i]in the daily lives of so and so...[/i]", it's like a soap opera.

Oh my god bro.
Every time I see that you've commented, and I see how long it is, it gives me a boner. Swear to god. I love your feedback so much because it puts my own story into perspective for me, hints to things that I haven't noticed before, etc.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it after all; I guess since I was the one who constructed it I just don't get the same effect haha.
[i]" it get boring when the main character is always some hardcore little punk, who's drop dead gorgeous with everything she wants."[/i]

I was totally nodding as I read this at the beginning, because I understand this completely. I think that most writers automatically assume that their character should be this strong-minded, overly brave individual, because in reality, you almost never see that and yet that's what everyone wants to be.

I want Evelyn to maintain several dimensions to her personality in the sense that she's outgoing around the band, yet has her shy moments when it's just her and Oli, and being very scared when in the presence of her father. I wanted to make it as realistic as possible, and I'm very glad that people take note of that.

And I think she acts the same way we do at our age is not only because she isn't so brave, but also because I'm 17 and trying to write from the perspective of a sort of doormat 24 yr old lol.

[i]"To shorten my essay that was totally uncalled for: I like Evelyn, quite a lot."[/i]

Broseph, don't you worry about writing an essay of a comment. I [b]live[/b] for that shit, so it wasn't uncalled for in the slightest. Please, say anything that's on your mind :)

[i]" The way you express things, and the attitude you have in your writing...it just blows my mind. Like, seriously, how do you do it? You have a really great writing style, it's so distinguished and...just brilliant."[/i]

Oh man, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! This had me beaming like you don't even know :D I can't really answer that question; it could be a combination of my personality and the fact that I've been writing for almost 4 years now. But...just wow. Thank you.

And I agree: Oli's a dumbass. But who knows, he seems like he has a pretty good head on his shoulders at times. Anger gets the best of everyone though, and since he's been sex-deprived for who knows how long, I guess you can't really blame him.

[i]"I could quote more, and write a ton more, but by the time you've gotten to this point, you'd be bored of what I have to say. Thank you for updating, and writing yet another amazing and inspiring chapter. I loved it, as always."[/i]

Again: I WILL NEVER BE TIRED OF THE CONTENT OF YOUR COMMENTS!!!!

And [b]thank you so fucking much[/b] for your feedback <3

Thank you for the comment(: you I'm trying to update soon, but it may be a little longer. xx