@ everybody who cares or bothers to look at these comments for no reason
my story should be up by eleven at the latest, cant wait to see how sucktastic it will be, but every body has to start somewhere. Please give me honest feedback, I want to try to get better, but I can't do it without critism. And if you read it and don't feel like leaving criticism, at leaf leave a smiley face or a frowny face according to how it made you feel. P.S. Friend me I'm lonely.