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I JUST GIGGLED HEAPS! Im so excited that you're considering using it :D
and, yeah just the ONE song...because Sam sings it to the 2 of them together and when the brotherly bits come up she looks at Joe and when the lover bits come up she looks at Nick, but Joe doesn't realise that to way later. Maybe its like 2 days later and Sam has been kind of different, but her face lights up when Nick enters a rooom. So Joe gets the song, sneakly and starts thinking about the way she looked when she sings it, looking past the fact about how shy and beautiful he thought she looked.
Then he confronts her, yes. So do something different, maybe he writes her anonymous letters saying, 'i know you like Nick' etc. and shes worried and confides in Joe, then they have a fight about the promise/engagement ring and he blurts out its him, so they have a massive fight and when everyone wakes up in the morning Sam is gone. Nick being Nick, knows shes gone to her dads, but lets her be.
Then, Joe ignores Nick and everything etc. So there is so much tention, even in interviews...Kevin can't take it anymore and Frankie has been distant cause he misses Sam.

So Kevin sees a text on Nicks phone saying 'im at dads, leave me be. xo Sam.' and he goes there to confront her, but when he gets there he sees her sad and stumbling around looking pathetic and exhausted, so he comforts her and tell her the situation back at Jonas household.
So she agrees to go home and stop whimping out, so she confronts it.
When she gets back, Nick isnt the same, and is distant.
Joe, takes that as he's chance to win her back. So he's mister mushy romantic.
She realises why she falls for him, when he takes on a date at a lake and tells her to push him in the water, then perform CPR so they can fall in love like they used to be. (: (:

Oh! I need to check out Mayday Parade. :D i'll do that now.
uhm, i have an ipod and a mobile phone...im saving up for a laptop.
Plus, i'd want to live in an all year cold place, but London England sounds gooooood. :D
what technology stuff do you have?
and, what accounts do you have? i have, formspring, facebook, twitter, myspace, tumblr....mind you most of them i dont use, i just get the invitation and make one (:

"let me just start with this.
"You are fucking amazing."
ahem.
your comments are incredible. dont ever doubt their epic-ness.
im sorry i made you tear up. i didn't mean to."
naw, thank youuu, but my comments are only good because you write everything nothing short of amazing :D as for making me cry, dont worry about it, it just shows that you have so much feeling in your story.

as for finally giving you a suggestion...i think she should write a song about Nick and Joe, make it about how she sees her boyfriend a brother and then let Joe work out that all the traits she portrays for her boyfriend in the song potray Nick and the brotherly things; they portray Joe maybe. Then, Joe says she can be with Nick but she disagrees and doesnt go out with either of them. She ends up moving out, or something...but, her and Joe are both down, so they get back to where they use to be...starting of as friends. then Joe could say something like 'i knew we'd be forever' <3

forgot my question xD ooooops.
uhm, so what music type do you like, also?

if you could live anywhere other then Australia or America, where and why?

sorry for scaring you. dont worry to much. you're nearly 20 i doubt you'd get it, i think you only get it in your teens and i mean, i had those symptoms and dont have it :D
yeah, i love the name of it, my friends always go, im having (something meat) this for lunch, but you wont will you, you pesco :D haha i just laugh. even though they dont understand and they're downing it.

yeah i agree, you really do have a natural writing ability and love that. btw, i commented on Australia.

im into all types of music from;
Kings of Leons.
The Killers.
Howie Day.
The Script.
Green Day.
Christine Agulirea. (sp?)
Jonas Brothers and Disney Stars.
but, im so open to everything except heavy metal.
aslong as the lyrics mean something to someone.

yeah. i had a diabetes scare last year. i had all the symptoms for type one diabetes. but after lots of blood tests and millions of doctors appointments i came up negative.
i lost heaps of weight.
drank lots of water.
went to the toilet 4 times a night whilst i should of been sleeping.
was always so tired.

that is all the symptoms of diabetes, im not even missing one. but i didnt have it, they dont know what i had but they're on the look out incase i develop it a little later (:

and, im only a pescetarian (: i still eat white meat...which is chicken, turkey and fish also. but yeah i dont agree with red meat, although i respect people who do it, its just my personal choice not too, but i dont get support for it.

i have an older brother names Gillies and he's just turned 17.
then i have step siblings, it gets complicated but theres 5 of them...Matt, Daniel, Casey, Teagan and Moo.

School is not something i absolutely love, but im incharge of my future, therefore i need to do good at school.
i love English and thats really the only one im good at too.
the other i skim through. (:
you?

my favourite food is rice or pizza; though atm i dont eat meat so its just vegetarian pizza or magarita... hehe.
my favourite drink is green tea or coke; no doubt about it! :D
how about you? and, do you have siblings?

i am really interested in pursuing my singing thang.
ill make some youtube videos of me singing and see what people think, ill also put it on my tumblr so i can get some feedback? would you watch it.
i want honest to all honest of feedback :D xo.
i seriously mean disecting all of it, and telling me when i sound crap etc.

i've always wanted to be a dancer. my parents divorced and my mum couldnt afford for me to do it.
so i plan on taking that up now that i have a job with my own money :D
uhm, i really want to be into running, so i want to pursue thats a hobby.
SINGING, i've been told i have an alright voice if i practise so i plan on accomplishing that.
but most of all i love to read, write and talk! (: heheheh.

uhm, mum is making me get off the computer but ill be back on later, im just going to think of some more questions, so you do that too! :D

tweet reply me quickly before you reply to this and tell me how much longer you'll be on... i wish we could exchange mobile number so we could text, but if thats weird we dont have too (:

hmmm. i plan on achieving all my goals, i would love to live a life that no one thinks im capable of doing. i want me living, in this world, to have an affect on the world when i pass.
even though i answered that, you need to use your thinking cap and think of one for me?
until then, what talents do you think you have?

im keeping this comment short otherwise ill ramble and our question game will never start xD
but be ready because it'll come full stream ahead, ill be asking for advice no stop. and thats awesome, i wish i started writing that young! but i suppose i can only pursue it now. :D
that gutted me a little bit, it sucks that your friends arent supportive, im sorry. but you've got me...always.
(okay, sorry, i know my short comments are still long xD)
p.s. i plan on suggesting very shortly.

yeah. thankyouuu really, it means so much to have your support.
and okay, how about at the end of your story if i want to, i can do a journal post and review your whole story for you, so you can see what stood out for me?

okay, i put my thinking cap on before...
what is your greatest ambition in life?

im thinking you're my new mibba bestfrannnnd tooo <333
im thinking that im going to explore my writing abit more i suppose, and thank you for the advice, because i suppose if you relate the character who is not famous to yourself you can never go wrong because you always just come back to your traits and personality right? thankyoouuuu.
okay this is really embarrassing, but i just started giggling at the comments, they're making me smile so much and my mum looked at me like im weird, oooops.
i think that by giving you my url, its me trusting you because i dont trust very easily, but you're so easy to get to know if you know what i mean? but i suppose, i dont really know you since we're on the internet, but from what i know, i like...you seem really cool. :D
and, im glad you're loving constructive critiscm, but you barely need it at all. You know how great id feel if i got on one day and you'd updated your story to do with something that i had said? (: my smile wouldnt leave my face for days.

yeah. :) thats Robert Schuller. i fell inlove with that quote when i read it on the back window of the car infront of me when mum was taking me to schoool xD
and its okay really, my parents have been divorced for a long time but it still gets to me alot...so i write about it to express my feelings and everything...
im glad that those author notes didnt apply to me, because i consistantly felt bad and weird that if i was at chapter 6 and commented when you'd just posted 129 you'd be like what? so i wanted to catch up before commenting. :D
would you like to play 20 questions about our life or something?

i love how we keep making each other smile, especially on Easter...this is an all round good day! (:
You are the only person i have given my Tumblr URL too. feel special? hehe.
Im not one to comment on a story if i dont like it, i tell them what i think and sometimes that really helps a person because they love constructive criticism. :)
i write fan fics, but im not usually one to continue, because i dont like my style of writing, if you know what i mean?
If i do write, i try and make the character WHO I want to be, not who i am....its sorta like me living in my own imagination for a little bit, it makes everything okay.

Hahaha you're so welcome and i'd love to comment and disect, i joined mibba because i love writing and expressing myself and thats exactly what i plan on doing, im really sorry i was hiding in the closet with this story and not commenting, but i only started reading it about a week ago. :D so im sorry.
and yeah same i love calling the Joseph and Nicholas, i mean, they are there names...
i just followed you on Tumblr but i dont know if i did it right? Im new to it.
and, i love quotes! i plan on getting a tattoo saying 'what would you do if you knew you couldnt fail?'

phew, im so glad shes not a video girl. that wouldnt be cooooool.
yeah, i agree she is going to hurt one of them no matter what, nothing is going to stop that at all, but i just hope she doesnt hurt them and then change her mind.
heheheh, i love how Sam has some of your traits, it sort of helps me understand who im talking too a little bit more.
Just so you know; im glad you write so i can understand the characters.

hahah, thats what its called! WORD VOMIT. :D i think i have that.
i commented on your story.
Cheah! Liam is such a babe! So hot in the movie.
And just for the record, that photo of Joseph Jonas on your profile is so damn cute, and hot all at the same time, only he can make that possible. Even though i have a theory.
Nick - has a place in my heart, there is just something about him.
Joe - is just wow when it comes to looks and just so funny, casual and free.
Kevin - will always, and continue to always be my favourite Jonas. :D
And, i plan on disecting all your chapter with my comments if thats what you want?
Yes, yes, yes you make me smile and we have that in common! i LOVE quoting things. You know my favourite?
'Dont Worry about the world ending today, its already tomorrow in Australia' or something along those lines, its by Charles Shulz.
ooooooh! i have Tumblr too, i just got it. So its not that great. :D

Even if they're not about story i love how long your comments back to me are, they make me smile. And, i feel privillaged to be your favourite commenter.
You know what kept me reading the story for so long? How you spell...because its so australian, mum, favourite etc.
It made me feel at home.
Then i just fell in love with the story line.
I love how you quoted my comment :D
I've seen the last song twice actually, thats how in love with it i am, hehe. you?
Also, feel absolutely free to post another chapter, its totally okay. *winks*

You're so welcome!
i hate commenting just saying i like it, i mean you ask for comments so you can get an idea as to what we like, etc.
i hope, that if i give people proper comments, they'll give them back...thats my goal.
hehehe i feel like Sam now, so confused as to what i want to happen with this story.
Oh, i just followed you on twitter, yep thats me @xo_tay your new follower haha.
And i plan to check out that band :D But, at the moment, im playing 'when i look at you' miley cyrus on repeat so i can learn the words, since my cousin thinks she knows them all (: heheh.