@ Michael Westen a foil character is basically a character you expect and doesn't change and is static in the story!!! No problem. I look forward to reading your story!
I wanted the character descriptions to be minimal so as the story progresses you learn more about them. As for Dylan, I'm not sure what a foil character is? And I haven't even seen GBF so... yeah.
@ Lily Barnes A girl who moves to Jersey and she's like reserved and doesn't want to get to know anyone bc she moves around a lot but of course Frank tries to break her out of that and more happens but I don't want to give away what happens in the next chapters!
Well I definitely have plans for him
Cool! If you want I posted another chapter, it's got some more character description and some more insight into Cara.