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gerardLOVEisCHEMICAL (100)

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hey wats up? havent talked 2 u n a while!!
well c u l8r

May 8th, 2008 at 12:26am

Marilyn. (100)

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Thanks for the criticism =]
I'll try and work on it, I just realized that you can't see the short summary which tells you who's p.o.v it is if you read from beginning to end.
From now on i'll post within the chapter who is talking.

xoxo

April 16th, 2008 at 02:10am

natzlovesyou (200)

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oh my!!!
in a way it's pretty hilarious haha! I've never heard that one before, haha.
You're pretty energetic, I can tell you that.
Oh, I've been well...I'm jsut deciding on a new stroy to write. THe one I uploaded is my favourite story so far....but I finished it long ago (few months) and I uploaded al 40 something chapters in one day..so I really want to write something new. I was thinking high school but I need a twist....
I'm not sure.
It's gonna be My chem for sure but I don't know....
any ideas?

April 14th, 2008 at 04:32am

natzlovesyou (200)

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=) your welcome sweetie.
how've ya been?

April 12th, 2008 at 11:02pm

NotCoolioYo (100)

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its a poem ta me

April 11th, 2008 at 11:53pm

natzlovesyou (200)

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thanks for reading my poems! Makes me so happy! *hugs*
In "I only wanted to make it alright" what the girl says means that she was the one that committed the awful murder described above. I mean, that's what it means literally.
But what it really means is that sometimes, out of anger most of the times but it can be desperation also, we tend to react rather drastically and violently at our troubles. That we get carried away and end up doing exactly what we didn't want to do in the first place. For instance, someone says that you're mean at school. And you know for a fact that that certain someone is really the most foul person you've ever heard of. Molesting little kids and all. And you say to this person "You have no right to say this to me when you're much worse. You talk about people behind their backs and molest those who are more fragile than you are. You feed on other people's sensibility just because you are afraid to show your own. You're a pathetic person that is just scared of showing the kind of shit that you really are..." and it goes on and on until you destroy the person completely. And then you realize what you did and that, in a way, you've become that person as well.
Do you get it now?

Thanks for all the comments!

April 10th, 2008 at 03:17am