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hey, omg thats off of words from the asylum on four o'clock,
love it!

Ha, thanks! For the comments and the musings.

Ha, I actually like that you got the nightmares vibe - I think it gives the poem more of a story, thinking about it.

sup bby

Wow, thanks for all of the comments! I am glad you liked the poems, and I am more glad that you actually said what you liked specifically, ha. The Sleeping one - it's not really so much that I have nightmares, it's more that I tend to move a lot during my sleep, for no really good reason, ha. Thanks again!

Ha, thanks!

Say, if you happen to have time, would you mind giving me some feedback on some of my poems? I think you would probably have something helpful to say.

You are welcome. I think that you do free-form well, so the messiness is not really an issue. Writing what one feels is difficult to do objectively, but I think you were able to do it decently.

Hey! Welcome to mibba.
Hope you have a lot of fun<3