Lol, thanks for the LONG journal comment, I play Bass drum, and I am so totally excited!! There's only one other girl in drum line, her name is Marissa, and is super nice so I'm gonna great :P
Thank you for pointing out the typos, I really appreciate it :)
Also thanks so much for going into to detail, on what you did and didn't like, because ultimately thats what I wanted anyways.
I'll be working up to longer entries aswell, as the protagonist gets more comfortable with the idea of opening up to Riot Mind... if that didn't sound weird.
I'm confused as to how exactly I look into publishing companies.
My age is 21 so I can read things that are rated-R and I did not think it was important.
I promise dearly I'll leave you a comment. It's just that since your comment was so detailed, I really want to return the favor. And at this point, I haven't slept for 35 hours and I basically don't know the difference between up or down.
So I'll comment tomorrow, after I've finally caught some sleep, if that's okay.
I'm not trying to offend you, I'm really not...but I can't help but wonder if your last statement has a lot to do with all I said. Yes, we should try to get rid of wars and world hunger. It's not as difficult as it seems. I did not say that people in America do not go hungry every night, but most have more than enough food. I know for a fact that MANY American's use financial aid, to have food stamps, which give them at least 100, but depending on the size of the family it could be 1000
WOMAN! Do you remember Johnny? From my old story Elizabeth?
He's made a reappearance. I had him in my characters list, and I've been wanting to use him for ever so I threw him into my new story.
BTW - you should stop disappearing. :D
Breathe is finished, Howl (my Embry story) is just about there and I've started on an original. I'm so excited.