Thanks for the comment =) And it's one person/"stranger". That line that you liked was Vegan. Friendly's (I loved that one too). I'm glad that you got some emotion out of the third letter though because I was afraid it was too unrealistic.
yeah, I know what you mean. But the change in P.O.V's is important to show the contrast in how the Princess narrates and how the boy doesn't. And I updated the story right now. haha. I just couldn't not. xD
Thank you for the story comment! And to answer your question, it does take place in this day and age, but Oskanapovia hasn't changed since the 18th century. I wanted to put that information in there, but I didn't think it'd fit quite right in that chapter, so it'll be in one of the future ones. :D
I read your comment on the Getting Comments forum and I agree.
It seems authors WANT to be original. But readers only want something with a character they can relate to (aka your average female teen) meeting a singer of some band and falling in love. And then because readers like those stories, the authors make those stories.
People like us, who are against that and are all for originality fail to get noticed or remembered. I put in one of my story descriptions: this is a story about NORMAL average people and their lives so btw no Pete Wentz!
And then I got messages with stuff like Why dyu have to put tha Pete Wentz thing in? You don't like Pete Wentz grrr! Hater! blah blah