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ahah... thanks... yea, Syn is amazing... and it was a good story, didn't take long to write... omg!?! I was writing an orignal slash with someone, and our first one got 10 stars, and we are on the prequel but she doesn't want to write it any more :'(

its sad.. .and yes, cookies tasting like ass would scar anyone.. .unless your gay and enjoy giving guys rim jobs... then they'd be use to it

Hey, thanks for taking the time for reading and commenting on my story (: I hope you like it

Its about Rock star slash.. I got Syn and Mikey... it was a very nice pair to me.. *is obsessed with Synyster Gates almost as much as Mikey Way*

damn.. I forgot about the guitar thing.. .that would suck ass.... like bad.. yea and I had my parents yell at me yet again, cause they think i'm faking and i dont try in school and i dont try to make friends, apparently i'm anti-social.. i learned that today, i'd say its something new, but theyve been saying it for the past 2 years...any who.. meep! I had a cookie, and damn it was a good ass fucking cookie.. *the cookie did not taste like ass, I just sware alot*

you could get your arm amputaed and sing Mama, and laugh at the slight irony... and the only thing new is, my pretty kitty Helena... and I have a massive headaches, and got one of my contest entry's in for hte contest before anyone else entered... that was cool...

It's okay.... i understand.... *pokes Helena the parrpt cat* she keeps trying to jump on my new laptop..... so what's new with you...?

Mikey time was exciting... and it's okay, you'll find it eventually.... I understand.. and I'm sure others do too...

Ive seen some that update every other month with the small chapters... I at least try and get 500 words if I'm in a block day, normally around 1000 if its a good day and im in a writing mood... and yes, I loved the chapter...tis amazing!

weird english teacher, but I think what she means is, way too much, in the wrong place makes it boring, your suppose to try and make a visula in my opinon, it's like 2nd grade, show don't tell.... three words, can make a better story... trust me, I've seen sooo many stories that just tell you, and don't show you, they're boring and shitty... no offence to those people, they're good starts, but a little bit more practice helps... though those people are the ones that make them like super short chapters which annoys me... it's like 20 lines long... I hate those...!! *done ranting*

haha... thanks for the story comment...

haha... yea, I figured it would be a negative on that scene... tis kay, I'll just have to write one for myself... alot of people say there hard scenes, and I kinda get that, when your expected to write them, but when you randomly throw them they're very easy for me... compared to the hour it takes to write the expected scene...

and yay! cup cake!!! and don't be afraid of expanding things, when you go back and re-read it, if it sounds like too much, then you know it might be, but really, can there ever be too much detail?

You're welcome! And yes, homophobia is gay.

Oh my god! I so want a picture of that...

Muffins are only ugly cupcakes... and they taste much better when in cupcake/muffin form... plus... more frosting!

I think that's how its spelled...and yes... sweet cupcake... i want to make double choclate with rainbow sprinkles... but my mom wont buy any cake mix or frosting... >< I hate being low on money...

Actually...that was incredibley helpful! I think I just had an ephiany(sp?) seriously... I get it now! *hugs you* thanks!!!!! *hands you lime green and purple cupcake*

I found song tabs... but I don't know the notes... its like a different language when I look at them... I want lessons, but we can't afford to get me any... which sucks... I keep trying but I can't find any really good how to lesson things online to help me... I've never seen a zebra print guitar but I'm pretty sure if you had enough money, you could get one custom made...

So far nothing... it's very hard teaching yourself how to play... I'm trying to learn the notes, but I can't remember which one is where half the time... and i wonder what muffins with food coloring would look like.... hmm.... and yes, I was listening to I brought you my bullets, you brought me your love on christmas when I opened my bass.... so it seeemed fitting to name it that... its zebra print too... yea, its sexy you can be jealous..lol. XD

Good...and yes, pink cupcakes... including the cake part... I like to turn the batter colors...though my mom has band me from making any cupcakes for while... apparently, I make too many...so I occupy my time writing or trying to play Bullet (my bass guitar)

good... now treat them very well and I'll make hot pink cupcakes... and thanks! I'm glad you like it!

yes, cool and crazy... mines in the 30s right now..... and please, be nice to your puppets... they love you..*hands you cookie* oh! and to thank you for letting me be Mikey's fictonal girlfriend... I made you a banner for your story... it's a little sucky but i like it, and I hope you do too.

http://i720.photobucket.com/albums/ww209/MiracleGates/PleaseSaveMySoul.jpg

enjoy your banner, and hopefully stay unconfused for the rest of day..hehehe...that sounded funny.