It sounds really interesting. I'll read and comment when I can.
You're a good writer you just need to really concentrate on your stories. Your ideas are interesting and you've improved a lot. I can't wait to read it. <3
Im good thank you, yourself?
I know, the weater is horrible. D:
I like it, I think you've done a good job. Although there are a couple of comma and spelling errors. But that doesn't matter because im nto too fussy about that.But yeah, I think you've done a good job on it, and im intrested to see where the plot goes. Carry on writing it, because i'll read. :D
I like it, I think you did a really nice job. I think I may have noticed a couple of comma/period/spelling errors, but I'm not too picky about those. [Some people are.] But, it didn't take away from the story or was overly obnoxious or anything. So I think you did a really great job and I"m interested to see where the story goes. I hope the police find Ashley's dad. Umm also, when she meets Gerard did you call the bathroom a portaroom or something? Hehe, I've never heard that word before. Could just be me though. . Hope that helped you some. Now...GO WRITE MORE. lol, just kidding take your time.
random profiles are the best, my dear.
thanks :DD.
yes, i'd love too. and ill definitely tell you what i think .
it's very nice to talk to you.
ill come right back and read it after i go harrass- eh i meant comment- one other person.
im angela by the way, otherwise known as ange, angie, kyli, bobby, angely on toast, angely, gely, gela, skeletor, or lord skeletor. wow that's a lot to type lmao.
oh and ill add you toooo.
and the only tip i can give you, is keep it real. and when you make twits do't ump around too much and make too much happen in one chapter if you know what i mean.And also try to put feeling into your words it hlps people relate to the story and stuff. Oh and dont be afraid to try new things and be original!
dude i read it, i like it :D I like the way it had such a bad middle when her dad left and stuff but the ending was positive, I hope her and Gerard get to know each other better, :D
I know, how you been! Meh, not having interenet sucks i just caem home from the library actualy and im super tired!!
I would love for you to send me anything your working on, i bet its fab! :D I guess not havig internet means you have more time to write with less distractions :D x
I'm not doing so much today.