May 11th, 2008 at 10:19pm
Thanks for the story comment.
But I have some comments on it;
1: about the "She said" thing, I was trying to establish the first person pov cuz the prolong was all dialog.
2:The "AKA" thing I did have doubts about, but almost everyone I read it to loved it so I left it in.
3:The "Spelling and gamer problems" you do have a point their but my dad's helping me now so that shouldn't happen aging.
4:You said that the prolog was kinda cliché, but their will be manger differences concerning it later on.
and 5: I said that the name "Diaries of a teenage Vampire" did not fit the stile but I do believe it fits the story line so I'm not planing on changing it.
I do like feed back and it makes my stories better, but I just wanted you to know why that's how I wrote it and how I'm planing to changing it.
But other then spelling/gamer I will not be changing the chapters I already have.