haha thanks for the story comment!
i can't tell if it was supposed to be some constructive criticism or if you were just stating how you feel about amelia's actions. if you could clear that up, that'd be awesome. i'd love to hear what you really do have to say about the story, especialllly if you're not satisfied. (:
Thank you so much for the story comment. :]
And you are so right on Oliver being headstrong. I think it's been pretty well illustrated thus far, right? Hah.
Oh man, it seemed that bad? Well, I hope it wasn't too unbearable. I'm so glad you've stuck through thus far, and I really thank you for leaving a comment. :]
I'm hoping that I won't be leaving too much untouched and untied in the end of this one, but what I have planned will hopefully work out. I hope, ahah. I'm glad to hear your thoughts and predictions on this though, because it definitely is nice to hear what's going on in someone else's mind when they read this. :]
Thank you so much for the story comment. :D
Thank you so much for the story comment. :D Really, it means SO much to me that you enjoyed it so much as to call it beautiful. That definitely means the world. :] And I'm so grateful to every other comment you've left me along the way. Just as well I was thinking, half of the things I ended up with in the story I never planned on in the beginning, but I guess that's how a story grows? I can't wait to hear your opinions on the sequel when I debut it!
Wow. Surprisingly, I never even thought about that park of his intoxication. I would like to say he really was just wanting to be with her, although I think with how drunk he was it can of course be viewed as otherwise. I'll leave it up to the reader. ;]
Thank you very much for the story comment! But yes, there does seem to be some drama floating around her leg now. I really didn't think it would get this much attention, but it's going to be pretty big when it finally does make its entrance.
Wow, really? Hah. Then I'm glad I was able to hit it. It would definitely be a serious talk though, but I think in the end it just shows how much you love the other. :]
i can't tell if it was supposed to be some constructive criticism or if you were just stating how you feel about amelia's actions. if you could clear that up, that'd be awesome. i'd love to hear what you really do have to say about the story, especialllly if you're not satisfied. (: