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  • La La Land Machine

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    Thanks for the comment!!
    June 27th, 2008 at 08:28pm
  • holysmokes

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    thanks for the comment on my story!
    June 27th, 2008 at 12:36am
  • Samantha Weasley

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    Haha, no. You will see!
    Anyways, did you like it?
    June 26th, 2008 at 08:48pm
  • bItTeRsWeEtNeSs

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    thanks, i'm glad you like my story. i'm planning on writing more soon. so stay tuned.

    :)
    June 26th, 2008 at 06:12am
  • livesoffspam

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    lol thank you so much! ill be adding more really soon, i just got back in town
    June 23rd, 2008 at 06:20pm
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    thanks, i'm glad you like it!
    sure i'll read yours :)
    June 19th, 2008 at 01:13am
  • LovelyMandy

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    OH I know CUte is amazing! I'm listening to Doctor......in my head. Still in school which sucks
    June 12th, 2008 at 02:51pm
  • echox3

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    Haha, your totally welcome.
    I just loved your story so much! <33
    June 11th, 2008 at 04:23am
  • sincerely hannah

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    Thank you!
    I [i]love[/i] your layout by the way.
    I read Twilight in one day.
    :]
    I'm currently hooked on New Moon, then I'm moving on to Eclipse.
    But was I seriously the only one who cried when Edward left Bella?
    June 9th, 2008 at 07:04pm
  • xBarefoot-Cinderella

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    YES!! finally someone who agrees with me....you're now my new best friend...just letting you know
    June 7th, 2008 at 01:34am
  • CarmellaJonas

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    thank you so much :D and ahhh! I'm a harry potter book fanatic too, dont we all love a bit of Mr. Potter?! hahaa
    June 2nd, 2008 at 12:54am
  • if you're a trout

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    lol, i highly doubt ghosts like the jonas brothers (:
    May 25th, 2008 at 12:59am
  • Something Like That

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    Hi theree.
    You seem pretty cool. (:
    I love Harry Potter and I just now started getting into the Twilight.
    May 24th, 2008 at 10:30pm
  • BlueRules

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    Hey! Whats up? Youa added me lol!
    May 23rd, 2008 at 09:02pm
  • HeartBeats.

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    Haha yea randomness is great,,,Lol Im a total harry potter freak two
    :)
    May 23rd, 2008 at 05:03am
  • if you're a trout

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    I sat sadly at the base of the tree, taking deep breaths and trying to collect myself. My body was still shaking with sobs. I hugged my knees and looked down into the lit up cityscape. I brushed my face with my sleeve and breathed deeply. I'd managed to stop sobbing, but tremors still shook through my body. I hid my face in my knees and sniffled.

    "Lauren?" I heard a sad sounding voice. I didn't look up, but I knew who the voice was. I heard the grass ruffle, and Kevin sat down next to me and put his hand on my shoulder. I growled under my breath, moving away. All I wanted right now was to be alone, and he was the last person I wanted to see.

    "Piss off, Jonas," I spat. He didn't move. I shook his hand off my back. He seemed to ignore me, tilting his head to the sky and sighing.

    "I like coming up here to think when I'm upset," he said in a dreamlike state, looking at the sky. My throat was dry. My chest felt hot and tight and I wanted to cry. But I held it back. I looked over at him.

    "Get [i]away[/i] from me," I snapped harshly, shoving him. He still didn't move. He looked at me with sad, bloodshot eyes.

    "I'm sorry for earlier," he said softly. "I didn't mean to be so mean, I'm just.....stressed latley. I feel really bad."

    "Get. Away. From me," I hissed through clenched teeth, standing up.

    "Lauren!" Kevin cried, rising. He grabbed my shoulders and turned me around to face him.

    "I accept your apology, okay? Just leave. Please, just go." I said tearily. I turned away, wiping my sleeve across my face to pick up the tears that were now falling again. My body tremorred again, and my legs almost collapsed under me. I inhaled deeply, steadying myself and wiping the tears. I would not let Kevin see me cry.
    May 20th, 2008 at 11:29pm
  • if you're a trout

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    HEY MAGS!
    Here's a sneakpeak to chapter 11!
    May 20th, 2008 at 11:29pm
  • IfPeopleWereRain

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    Thank-you for The Comments and Friend Request! I love Twilight and Harry Potter actually. At the moment I am a little busy but I'll be sure to check out your stories and leave a comment.

    :) How Are You?
    May 14th, 2008 at 04:30am
  • Just A Dreamer

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    Hey thanks for the add!!! Thanks also for loving my stories!! It means a lot. I love to write and knowing people love them it means a lot!!! btw I'm Magen!! :D
    May 13th, 2008 at 02:49am
  • all.time.aly

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    Aw! I'm glad you love my story! Those Jonas boys are pretty amazing!

    I added you back!

    OMG! I LOVE the Twilight series. Twilight is my favorite book ever! I am soooo excited for the movie!

    ~Aly
    May 13th, 2008 at 01:47am