Where shes in power placement and um she bumps into warren.But over all i like Tara's personality and i really dont see anything wrong with you story.Perhaps you can add more characters that soon be her friends and all the wild stuff and pranks they do at school...lol just throwing ideas around
When you're on your homepage, on the right there's a column full of things. Click on CSS under profile or layouts... In CSS there are premade layouts and you choose and install one... I like to be different... so yeah. haha. Ahh, I see.