amaya.-. / Comments

You're welcome. =] I'm not sure if I have ever made a lady blush so there's a pat on the back for me lol.

Woohoo you've already got another update half done? You got me all excited again haha I can't wait. =D

on't they just become loose sentences? You don't see books written that way either..

I tried to write in a similar way to books.. but is mibba's definition of paragraphs seperating sentences?

We do it that way because on Mibba we can't do indentations the way they do in novels. So the spacing between paragraphs is a way to make up for that. Without it, the writing looks sloppy and it's hard to read.

It's simply a part of internet etiquette. A way to make it easier on the readers.

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And it's no problem at all. I imagine it's very frustrating the way people are reporting vague things without specifically pointing out what's wrong. I don't understand why people do that, it's not helpful at all.

I just saw your post in the forums about being reported and took a look at your stories. The ones who reported you were referring to paragraphs like this:

[i]“So what’s the craziest thing you’ve done lately?” I blinked, staring at a grinning Bam in my doorway. “That’s your opening line for all your conversations? Cause I imagine that taking disastrous turns in a few situations..” He frowned at me. “What’re you- WOAH!” Digger sped past him, running straight through the bushes dividing our yards and out of sight when he passed Bam’s house. “What’s your dog on!?” Bam asked, stunned. I grinned, unable to disguise my snort. Nice going Ness, very ladylike. “He’s little and he just woke up Bam, he’s bound to be a little hyper. Especially since I haven’t walked him yet..” Bam raised his eyebrows. “So basically it’s a mini-animal version of Raab?” I rolled my eyes and laughed. “What are you here for Bam..”[/i]

Which should look closer to something like this:

[i]“So, what’s the craziest thing you’ve done lately?” I blinked, staring at a grinning Bam in my doorway.

“That’s your opening line for all your conversations? Cause I imagine that taking disastrous turns in a few situations…” He frowned at me.

“What’re you- WOAH!” Digger sped past him, running straight through the bushes dividing our yards and out of sight when he passed Bam’s house.

“What’s your dog on!?” Bam asked, stunned.

I grinned, unable to disguise my snort. Nice going Ness, very ladylike. “He’s little and he just woke up Bam, he’s bound to be a little hyper. Especially since I haven’t walked him yet..”

Bam raised his eyebrows. “So basically it’s a mini-animal version of Raab?”

I rolled my eyes and laughed. “What are you here for Bam..”[/i]

Dialogue needs to be properly space, otherwise the story is just really confusing to read.

Awesome. :)

Thanks for commenting.I changed the font. Does that read better? :-\

Incredibly good looking. People don't know the 69 eyes! I barely knew them, because of this story I grew to be a fan. (I saw him on Viva La Bam, and on other things, and thought is was hot, and when I was desperate to write something good I choose him because of his hottness). Anyway, hahah. Thanks again!

Just wanted to stop by and say thank you for your comment and support! <3.

Your welcome, your great at writing.

Thanks for your comment! I am adding picture links to all of my chapters because I plan out the chapters with pictures, helps me visualize and be more in the moment. So, after I add them then I will update as a token of me finish! I think I have 1-6 and 38-present done. :)

oh now you've made me curious!
update soon please!

Golly gosh another five chapters! It's like Christmas in July lol. I'll go read now...

Hey, hun, just stopping by to say I loved the update. *hugs*

i realize that this comment is so late.
but only just found your story.
i adored every freaking chapter of your chase/bam story.
your an amazing writer. :)

Sometimes good comes from selfishness. Hahaha. Not.
But okay, Thank you for the comment!

Thanks for the comment. Nah! I got your humor, I am a bit strange myself. I have written the end (I think it goes up to the 50s) (I am going to redo it during my week off from school before I start summer quarter of college. :)

Hey Love. How are you?

Just passing by to tell you I've been reading one of your stories: "They say love is blind, or is it just me?" . I like it so far, you're doing a good job! =) . I'm still in chapter 9, tho, but I'll keep reading. I hope you had a nice day!

Tzofi.

Ps: I couldn't help but notice that you tried to include some spanish phrases in chapter 9.. And well, sometimes translators can betray you. They were not quite accurate. My everyday language is spanish, so if you ever need me to translate anything for you, just let me know.

thanks for the story comment
=]

awesome tell when it comes out i'll definatly check it out!
and ur very welcome.

love your stories, thank god you updated<3

Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you like the story; I've actually been reading Misconnected for a while now, and I found it really funny that you decided to read my story. So, yeah, thanks again.