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  • vanete.

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    I can wait, just tell me when you're done and I'll go back and re-read it and finish it and whatnot. And it wasn't boring, the characters and the story itself was good. It was just the fact that the writing was a little bland, which can happen to the best of stories.

    Yeah, but I changed it a little bit from how the story is. And I'm delving into a little background info about Aubrey, like how he met Gabriel and whatnot. =) I guess it's good, I only have 31 pages so far.

    Oh? So he is crazy? How so? That's interesting...living with criminal pyschologist and being insane. Who would have thought? Unless she met him and knew but married him anyways. o.O

    You are most welcome. :arms:
    September 1st, 2008 at 03:48pm
  • vanete.

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    Me too! They're so intriguing, and tend to be rather smart, seeing as they get away with their crimes, at least for a while, if not forever.

    Ted Bundy scares the fuck out of me, to be honest.

    And that's pretty cool that you're studying law. What's that like? Are you studying everything about law or just, like a certain aspect of it? Are you going to become a lawyer? My curiosity gets the better of me, I'm sorry.

    And I'm writing a novel about Aubrey and Gabriel. There aren't enough novels that are purely focused upon the killer himself, or herself, they tend to follow the police investigation which is all nice and dandy, but I'd rather follow the killer and get inside his head and start to understand him and why he does things, you know?

    So, I'll definitely at least start your one about school shootings. It sounds interesting, and rather original, especially on here where original fiction is not quite so common.
    August 31st, 2008 at 04:40pm
  • vanete.

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    Ooo, I hate that. Which is why I try to, like, not explode when I'm expressing my opinion, even though it's hard, since everyone wants their's to be the right one, you know? And I tend to be very passionate about my opinions, which doesn't help. XDD

    My views and interests differ from the norm as well. Most thirteen year olds don't read books about serial killers, nor do they write them. XDDD

    And thank you, sososo much for reading them! :arms: I'll read yours when I get the chance, I'm kind of busy with shit right now, but thank you sooo much. <333
    August 31st, 2008 at 05:09am
  • vanete.

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    Nah, that's cool. I can completely understand that. As a writer of both, it does get a little tiring after a while, especially since I put so much damn work into my OF. =/

    Don't worry about it. I wasn't mad or anything, especially since you're so nice about it all when you were explaining it (once I got into this whole thing with this other chick. it was a disaster. All I did was state my opinion and she blew up. >_<).

    Same goes for me. If you need anything or any help, just ask, I may be able to help. :cute:
    August 31st, 2008 at 03:49am
  • vanete.

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    >_> I think the only part of your comment that insulted me was the fact that you said that you hate the book, although I do respect that it's your opinion. =)

    No, I didn't come from Quizilla. I came from INO, Mibba's sister site, and before that, LJ. I do see your point, however; I write both fan fiction and original fiction. My Harry Potter fan fiction has at least 20 readers, although my original fiction doesn't even have 10.

    So I do understand that you may feel that way about Harry Potter. It was just the way you worded it on the thread, as if simply because the series is over and because JK Rowling is the creator, we shouldn't be writing any FF. And seeing as that's one of my favorite fandoms, I kind of take it a little too personally. Ahh, I'm such a dork. :XD

    But no worries. I wasn't trying to be rude or particularly attack you or anything. I just wanted to explain the other side of it. So sorry if I sounded defensive. And I accept yours. :cute:
    August 31st, 2008 at 03:15am
  • Break Me Down x3

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    Ohhhhh. Ha, ha. Thanks.
    And no I didn't start school yet, but I finished both reports. I start school september 3rd. I'm kinda scared, haha.

    But thanks for all the help.
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    August 29th, 2008 at 03:51am
  • ChloeBarrett

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    ooh la la! will do ;)
    August 27th, 2008 at 11:04pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    Haha, that book is so full of surprises. I actually recommend it if you're into reading novels that are a little different. I thought that might be what's happening in your's, but I shall let myself be surprised. It's no fun knowing the ending, seriously.

    You're welcome, and I understand what you mean with the fillers. Notebooks are magical, XD
    August 27th, 2008 at 10:20pm
  • Monkeyninjapower

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    Yea i was
    August 26th, 2008 at 08:12pm
  • kAiE

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    aww that would have been cute =) my mom's cousin raises injured wild animals that he finds outside his house..he has a chipmunk now named Mickey =3
    August 26th, 2008 at 04:20pm
  • BigMac!

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    hey watz up??
    August 26th, 2008 at 06:21am
  • kAiE

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    cool! another Quizilla! user =) i read your journal about Mickey the baby squirrel..i'm so sorry for what happened =( i love squirrels(they are abundant where i live,and i got one to crawl onto my shoulder^^)
    August 26th, 2008 at 01:26am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Ahhhh, I see. I know, and they weren't really the best stories out there was the thing. Mhmm, I don't mind it so much. But fortunately there is DeviantArt and Fictionpress, =)
    August 25th, 2008 at 10:09pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    It's fine. I know what you mean about how frustrating it is when readers don't comment, or it feels like no one is even reading your stuff. I guess because of how ignored I was on Quizilla, I just got used to how original writers get snubbed.
    August 25th, 2008 at 08:53pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    Oh, you're welcome. :nods: Oh, you don't, trust me. I have the same problem with my work. So, you're welcome (again).
    August 25th, 2008 at 08:23pm
  • Song of Storms

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    Same with me, I start school next week too so I have to do it soon. Lol.
    August 21st, 2008 at 05:26pm
  • Song of Storms

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    Yup, I do remember you! How've you been?
    August 21st, 2008 at 04:21pm
  • Dysfunctional Beauty

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    Oh that really bites. I hate it when you just HAVE to buy that really expensive book that you use for one WHOLE school year >.>
    I don't see how that's necessary... haha ;)
    August 15th, 2008 at 10:36am
  • S.A.M. Fonceca

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    Yeah, it's a jonas and the mighty fanfic. It's more based on the movie of freak the mighty instead of the book.
    August 15th, 2008 at 05:06am
  • Break Me Down x3

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    Ha, ha thank you. That's what I was thinking it meant.

    I got to the part where Brinker was question Phineas in front of everybody about what happened the night he fell, and I was wondering why he did that?
    I kinda think he did it because he didn't like Gene and he wanted to ruin his friendship with Phinease. Haha I'm prob. so off.
    August 15th, 2008 at 04:56am