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ha ha yeah everyone has recommended it

hey thx. i really needed like someone to talk to since i cant like find my friend on here. thx for ur help

loll
yeah i think i might go buy it today acually lol

ha ha i love randomness so its all good.lol.
yeah i really want to read Twilight

i like to read anything and everything
i like science fiction and realistic fiction the most though

oh and Polaroid Pictures is amazing so far :)

yeah im going to start posting soon
ok
yeah ill deff start to check out some stuff :)

aww thank you so much
yeah im doing the same since im new im finding some friends also :)

thanks for the welcome
really nothings up here.lol.
how about with you?

ahhhh ty! im new to mibba. i moved here cuz stupid quizilla stoped being cool and it became very difficult to update. The only thing i dont like about here is tht i cant really use my old layouts that i could use on their website. Do you know where i can get some nice layouts for here??

I read your polaroid pictures story. It's still too early to tell where it's going but I can already see the beginning of some good characters. I like Isabelle. She's really personable and seems like someone I would want to hang out with if she were real.
Criticism: watch the run on sentences. All the "hence the..." should be separated by semicolons, not commas. If there are more than 4 commas in a sentence consider revising it.
It's got a lot of potential and I can't wait to see what happens next.

OMG! I started reading her feminist story on quizilla before it got retarded...I didn't know she made the switch over. I think it's one of my favorite stories.

Beta readers can be pretty helpful, and I'd love to have one.

I see what you mean about the fanfics, and I'd be happy to be a beta for your stories.

Ah, the HP marauders...I don't usually read fanfics so I didn't know if the meaning changed somewhere, but I guess not. Yeah, huge HP fan here too...but I just never got into any of the fanfics. Aaand...people laughing at me doesn't bother me in the least. There's usually a good reason for it. :)

If I give you some feedback on your stories can you read mine?

I never wrote anything on Quizilla, but I read a lot. It's impossible to find anything anymore. It's ridiculous.

I know this is probably a really dumb question, but what exactly is a marauder? I've never been able to figure it out.

It's kind of funny how we can be shy with people we've never met, and most likely are never going to meet. I'm the same way, but I get annoyed with myself after a while and just go for it. It helps in the long run, I think.

I've only got 2 chapters out now, but my story is about a girl who refuses to speak after she sees her brother murdered 6 years ago. There's the new guy in school who sees something more to her and it turns out he's got a secret of his own. I make it sound kind of cliche here, but it really won't be...I hope.

Well, everybody's gotta start somewhere.

I'm branching out and trying to find people willing to read my new story.

I seem to have a shortage of interested readers, therefore I can't get any feedback on what I'm doing.

Lame, but that's life. I figure if i get to know some people on here people might actually become interested in what I'm spending my time on.

How long have you been writing?

Yeah, i was doing a shoot with luke and my other friend and we were just walking around and luke saw the bathroom... turns out i got a 96 for breaking the rules ;)

Cool! I love when pretty accidents happen! WOO!

Yeah! The only thing i don't like about the classes is that they try to wean you off of that. they try to make you do this method where you set up junk and it takes time... rather than just being random and clicking away like a hyper kid!