Kerard / Comments

haha nothing much really.
i live in los angeles, california....leaving for irvine in a couple of minutes.
you?

ah. im wrong...you can add friends! haha. im new at this.

haha your stories are AMAZING.
so i think i realize that we can't have official friends or anything here...
hm.
but yeah, they're greatttt. and im jealous of your writing ability! haha.

but yeah, im mariah. hello!

Hahaha thank you so much! :]]]

I had no idea you were reading.

-feels self-conscious-

Hi!!!!! i'm Christine!!!!
i LOVE ur stories!!! i would sell my soul 4 an update! lol

You're welcome. :D And the update was ah-mazing as usual, of course.
Lol, yeah..the whole band was amazing. The energy they put into their music is just excellent. I love them..lol

so how`re you? (:

Your Story Is Amazing! Please Update..x Could You Check My Story Out - I Don't Love Him...Do I? Its Not As Good As Yours..x

Ugh, I truly loveee your story. :] You write so well; I'm jealous. ^.^

hello :)

I Love your story so MUCH!

Wow you are an amazing story writer can you write some more of the story please please please please i love it make aother story just like it please?

Melissa (big MCR fan)

hey,
I like your new hair better if I may say so ^_^ I bought some black hair dye today...hopefully I can get it done soon :)
Hope you're soon 'ungrounded' ;)
xx

thanks for the story comment! glad you liked it lol.

read your grounded thingy.
aw man! that sucks! oh well, look on the bright side, at least you have super-groovy hair now!
not that it wasn't nice beforehand!
many fathers do not appreciate the wonder that is Gerard Way. I showed my Dad a picture of him, he shook his head and said, 'The poor guy.'
O.o
anyway, hope you get online soon to write your rockin' story!
<3 callie
p.s. sorry about your grandma. that sucks ass:(

Hi! I read your "chapter"

Your new hair is cool

Your dad sounds mean

MArilyn MAnson rocks

Hi :D

Hello :)

yeah....it took a while....like I think about 3 or 4 hours....doing nothing but reading...lol
but it was worth it!!! I love it!!
^date soon!!!

=)
It added real effect to the story, ya'know? So it makes me think that further on into the story, Gerard and Mikey will Renew their brother relationship, and maybe start the band, and bring in Ray and Bob, or Ray and Matt, how ever you plan to work it.

I used Ray and Matt, and had an audition thing to bring Bob since, since the band found out Matt was a homophobe.

heh; ♥

=)
Why yes, it did take forever, but it was an amazing story, seriously. My favorite thing about the story so far is the use of foreshadowing when Frankie mentioned the band, and Gerard was like, "Like THAT will ever happen"

And then I was completely taken back when they found Money. I was like SHIT SON! haha.

I really love the vibe you had with Gerard at the beginning. Most frerards loose that as they get further into the story. Don't loose that. The darkness of Gerard / drugs / Alcohol adds an original touch to the story, since like i said before, they all start with it [even mine do hah] and then most loose grip of it.

Anyway, looking forward to an update;

♥