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ahaha secrete is quite disgusting. and velux. and fallopian. i like vixen. and ostentatious. and you dont have to rush it :] im happy with waiting. endings are quite difficult

youre welcome :] some people say that i 'leak' creativity, compliments and creepiness, my three C's however, leaking would imply that it was unintentional, and as if something was wrong, so i think i'll say i secrete it :] and im quite excited :] thankyou.

No problem. I strive to give feedback because I feel like it's a necessary part of writing that you don't find much on Mibba.

Ahh, I love you. : D

I just realized how little I actually go onto the actual website because my main page looked like ick. haha

I completely changed it. :))

I feel very proud of myself.

I don't write that much anymore, a lot of my energy is put into my actual artwork.

So when I was writing I was like.. I missed this. haha

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much. :)

I love writing stuff like that. C:

No problem, I enjoyed reading it :) Glad to know my comment was appreciated.

haha
thanks for the advice, but what i wrote was really immature, so I think I'll just turn in my rewrite i started last night.
xD

A more pure love none could find.
How you describe yourself as uninteresting, I see quite opposite. Who could deny the appeal of Golem impressions, or the slightly altered mind of a painter? (For I believe that most artists and painters for that matter, function a slightly different level. Which in my experience has oft been a case of 'all the odder')

And in any case, I tend to drag out interesting snippets from even the most dull person. So even if you were the drabbest, most boring and tedious person on the planet i'm sure i'd find something about you which I would call interesting.
But that's completely irrelevant, seeing as how your writing suggests that you -are- interesting indeed.

Ah, i've been rambling. My apologies.

Not a problem. As long as you have something going, I'm happy. (:

Haha, yay you're welcome!
I don't mind. I just kept staring at those since it's not like you to have them.
And I'm happy my rambling managed to make sense xD

I ended up doing it as a story comment. Kinda like with the "story/review" game thing.
-smiles like a major dork-
i lurvs juu and jor writing =]

“Dave was smiling, but there was a fragile edge to it, and I purposefully broke the moment by flopping myself on top of his scrunched up frame, his icy face pressing against my collarbone.” Chap5
“The couch was too small for two teenage boys really, especially one as tall as myself, but I made sure that my head lay next to his anyway, our cheeks pressed tightly together, so that I could feel the tremors that shook his skin with every breath.” Chap5
“His lips were parted slightly and his eyes flickered with dreams beneath pale eyelids even while drunken teenagers crashed noisily around him.” Chap1


All of these are excerpts from Sleepyhead because I’m in love with that story >_>
It might not be obvious to you, but the way you manage to use descriptions of the things around your characters such as body parts, hair color, teeth, and such, is very different and unique. It’s how I recognize your writing from everyone else’s because in every one of your stories, there is always some sort of sentence where the protagonist is thinking and body parts and the like are compared. I love it. Lol.
And, I will check in on the Haunting. Tell me, do you want me to PM you the mistakes, profile comment, or story comment them?

-points-
You changed your layout to sleepyhead's!!! <3

-coughs-
And I love the story even though it's kind of strange. Idk, your style of writing is intriguing because it's so different -but in a good way, mind you.
I've never read anything that mixes the persons emotions with body parts and descriptions. It must be very hard to accomplish lol, but you do very well at it. =]

And I know what you mean about looking back on a story and feeling detached. But don't worry, it was great =]

Also, I saw a few errors on Haunted but I don't know if you wanted someone to point them out so I didn't say anything >_>
It's nothing major, I just randomly remembered that lol

Hello, I just wanted to let you know that my, "I Give You A Prompt, You Give Me A Story" contest's deadline has been extended to June 23.
If you have any questions or concerns, ask me, and I'm sure we can find a solution.
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/156855/

Oh, it does make sense. I never thought of it that way. Thank you for shedding a new light on the subject. I suppose calling it a disorder only made everything worse because I already felt that there was something wrong with me in the first place.

Oh, I'm sorry to hear that your experience was horrible. I hope everything is okay now. :/ What interested me is that you said that it's normal for young people to act socially anxious?

The results for my [i]pre-write contest[/i] are up!

Ah, you needn't worry. You did it perfectly.