Thanks for the story comment. I don't usually prof-read them because I do it on saturday nights when I have time, and then the next day I have 5 games, and church. I try my best not to switch it as much now. I started this story back in April when I first started writing. I'm only 11 years old, so I can't make it as good as many others. I would change the name, but in my opinion, I don't like changing things. I'm greatful for the story comment, but I'm going to keep it the way it is.
Thank you for the feedback on my stories! You are totally right, I should be spacing out my paragraphs. I've been doing that in the more recent stories, but I didn't do it in the older ones. It bugs me too when I read stories that are not properly spaced out, so I should go back and fix my older stories. Thanks for pointing that out!
Ah yes! I could totally see him running around slaying dragons with an axe and the dragonborn armor. Looking all scrumptious & what not! And yes, after I watched Snow White I totally said it looked like Skyrim without dragons! :O
Thank you so much for the comment! Ahh yes I should probably re-re proof read I tend to do this late at night and proof read them then and you just post. I'll definitely look into that and I just want to say thank you again.
Thank you so, so much! Your comment not only cracked me up with the banner comment, but made my day! And, I play skyrim ALL the time and I totally imagine the scenery of Tamriel when I am writing this! Again, thank you!!