midnightwalker / Comments

Omg, I wrote 'blow job'? thanks for warning me... wtf xD I don't know why the hell I wrote that xDD I've never been to Brighton but I'd love to :) But I guess I'm gonna be visiting all the UK because I always need to take a train to Leeds from somewhere else, in most cases, London. :)

p.s. you have a massively good musical taste :) i also love MCR, simple plan ,30stm . and you live in liverpool , that's really cool :) I'm gonna be studying in Leeds this September, for the whole school year

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Thank you so much for being honest , it really helps! some of the things you pointed I had already noticed about my writing, but didn't know how to overpass them, like for example the dialogues, I didn't wanna be always saying 'hello' - said Scarlett, 'hi' said Liza, and so on... but the truth is I haven't figured out yet a way to make it more balanced, so what I tried to do until now was just simplifying the dialogues in a way that the reader could understand who was talking. But I agree, it need to be clearer. About Scarlett falling inlove with a woman, it is right..i didn't understand what confused you coz u didn't seem to have finished your sentence. About the sex scene...I also think that comparing it to other writer's scenes it seems to have been hushed... but to be honest I didn't realise that until you said it, because when I wrote it it felt to be long. I guess that happened due to my connection to the story, you see, I'm bissexual but I have only come out to some friends, and I've never had a real experience with another woman who truly liked me, and maybe that's why it was a bit 'painful' for me to write it, but I felt the need to introduce a sex scene in the story, because the love between the characters is very passionate. And also because I never read any lesbian sex scene, a thing which I should have done before I wrote my own. But thank you so much again for taking the time to told me your opinion in a detailed way, I truly appreciate it. And again, if you read something which made you think Scarlett was not a lesbian just tell me which scene you're referring to :) maybe it was just a spelling mistake, and I'm really sorry about that, but as I'm not an english native speaker, sometimes I may distract myself and mess up. xoxo

haha! thank you soo much! i was soo in love with my english teacher when i wrote that :L glad you like it! remember! COMMENTS = LOVE! xxxx

Heyy :) Glad you like them :) comments on the others appreciated if you think they need anything more :) wicked good profile too (Y)

Hey, this is the author of Impossible Conversion. And no, I haven't even heard of that film.

13 and 23?! oh my godd! thats really NOT healthy.
and you can do better, who needs the drama? if shes playing you, its her loss because you're a really cool girl

yeah its tough =/
im going away to college next year and my girlfriend isnt so im leaving her here and its killing me. you need to be close to someone u date or it gets soo much harder

oh jeeze im sorry =[
i seem like a jackass now dont i =[ lol
and ur not bad at anything, its hard finding the right person to date

hehe aww yay im so happy for you!! i wish you both a lot of luck =]
my girlfriend is sitting next to me at school and she thinks you're super awesome ^_^

aww i'm sorry he did that to you!! personally i find that women are more caring and everything. (they also make better lovers >_>) lol. but no matter who youre with, you deserve to be happy

ahh no please dont hurt yourself!! i know you love sports but pleasee don't get hurt because i'll cry!! =[

omggg Ty im so sorry!! that sounds so awful! =[ *gives you a hug*
hopefully seeing your bf will make you feel better
i really really hope you feel better soon hun =[

i just read ur paragraph haha
aww that sucks that you cant do sports!! :( it would be like someone telling me i can't write for 2 weeks. id die x_x
please dont become a crack head O_O
i hope ur legs are okay!!
i can bend my finger all the way back to touch my hand, it makes my mom scream too XD

omg i hope ur okay now im worried bout you =[ =[ =[ =[

AND THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING! :D *gives lots of skittles*

sorry i don't have an msn >_< *cry*
but the label thing i totally get
because yeah, like in my head i'm not just one thing. i love my girlfriend and i'm very attracted to girls, and i thought i was a lesbian, honestly. but then there are guys i think are cute, in a totally different way. but i can't live without girls, they are just too damn cute! XD
i think ur pretty awesome and therefore allowed to be vain XD
i'm super insecure, which is wayy worse than being vain haha

*giggles* its lovely ^_^
i love being weird hehehehehehe
i love rainbows and pandas and vampires and the 19th century and medieval torture and sociopathic thinking interests me =]

hahaha thank you!!
that purple hippo you have scares me O_O lmao

thank you soooo much for the comment, it really means a lot to me!
nice profile =]