Hey there, sorry for dropping by so randomly! Stopped by to say I posted a new journal regarding my stories I thought you should see if you’re still subscribed to them. Thanks again and have an awesome day!
Thanks for that advice and the story comment, I always wondered how I could make the paragraphs flow bettter! =) And I'm glad you're enjoying. Any more advice you have I would love to hear as the story continues
Thanks so much for the amazing comment! I really appreciate your feedback, as well as all of your ideas :)
You're right, that's why I have to slow down on the violence. It would get too unrealistic I think, even though it already is.
Alright, I'll definately try to place some history where it fits, because I really enjoy writing that.
Alright, I'll try to do a bit of both, hopefully where it fits.
Good, I'm glad you said you want me to drag the steps out, because that's exactly what I want to do. I just didn't want people to get bored, because there's some people saying 'When are they going to get together?', while I just really want to slow it down and create an atmosphere before the serious stuff gets started.
Thanks so much! Aaagh, they'll be over soon, and hopefully I'll do ok :)
Thanks so much for the comment! It's always great to get new commenters!
And thanks for the critique, not a lot of people do that but it really helps me improve my work, so thank you! The next one should be out in about... five minutes!
That sounds really cool, when do you reckon you'll have it finished by?
Is the main character male or female?
I have a fair few books on the go myself, but I've only ever finished one... I was eight when I started it and ten when I finished it - It was 80 pages long and I thought it was the best thing ever! Haha. Since then I've tried a lot of times, but no luck =/ Where do you get inspiration?
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Haha "kind of like a Skittle fight" =P
Today it turned to ice and I fell about a thousand times. =/
And it was freezing but it was still pretty damn fun. I reckon I will def. be sick of it by tomorrow, though...
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You're welcome. =)
I very much look forward to the "squee"-ing.
It's an awesome pun, works perfectly.
And btw I am totally looking forward to an update, and I guess it's your go? ;)
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