I'm glad it was worth the wait! That makes me so happy, especially as I was iffy on it because I felt it too stiff and awkward. But your comment makes me feel so much better<3
When people rush things in stories, I cringe. That is my biggest pet peeve. So I work so hard to make sure I don't do the same mistakes in my own writing. But I'm really pumped that you picked up on that.
Thank you so much for the story comment/birthday wishes/condolences on my grandfather. You're amazing. I think I love you. Just kidding. But I'm super appreciative of your sweetness. :) <3