I've seen pictures of a part in the movie that really bother me, not just because its Garrett, but just because she's taking her underwear off and holding them out in front of him, it's just.
What? Oh please tell me she doesn't spoil him? If she does anything...nasty I just can't watch it, It'll ruin the whole 'He's fucking hot' thing for me.
I haven't read you're stories YET but I'm going to and then I'll tell you if you suck or not ;) but I'm pretty sure you don't lol.
and Just do what you want, you don't have to do shit for anyone else, its what you enjoy then do it, and awesome, I wrote around 20 chapters of Midnight Lust and then I got...writers block.