Oh wow an incorrect language? So is English not a language anymore? Wouldn't surprise me pluto's not a planet and there are 5 oceans not 4 :) people can be a little weird :) so how are you?
oh cool! you know he has an older sister too right? gotta love trying to keep the siblings straight haha. but i know his sis is married and has kids.
that's cool that you're going back and adding things. always a good way to go sometimes.
haha good thing! always gotta have some hostility in a story like that lol. btw loved both updates today! i'm anxious to see how things turn out. i really like how you have her close with matt baker. definitely a nice change in a story haha.
Yeah! It's always like that, and then they ALWAYS go shopping because guess what? The members of a7x's girlfriends likes to giggle and take their creditcards. Sometimes those stories gets annoying. I really like yours though :) Great work!
I agree with you, but in all honesty I'd read anything as long as it's written well and not too cliche, LOL. But your story is indeed written well and far from cliche, trust me. I don't usually comment on a lot of stuff but I felt had to with this, 'cause it's so awesome :P
Haha, I'm up for the night so if you do post a chapter, I'll be reading it!