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I just wanted to let you know that I recently created a website. It's actually turned out pretty well so far.
http://www.thefreshpen.com
The site is all about becoming the best writer you can be. You can post your work there, and have it critiqued by your peers. I have had a few of my own works critiques and the insight is very helpful. All of the critiques are done through a new comment system on the page. There is also a forum where you can chat with all of your friends on the site. You should definitely look into it. If you are interested in writing for the site, or if you have suggestions, please let me know. I would love to hear way to improve... Thanks! :D

Alex, Paul, and Chloe are all caught between a rock and a hard place. None of them really know what to do. And honestly, this is getting tough to write. The next chapter is going to be a doozie.

Thanks for the comment!

I know.
It's one huge, sad mess at the moment.
But I'm glad that you like it.

Thanks for the feedback!

You feel bad for Alex because even though he's a mega douche, he's an absolute mess without Chloe.

Thank you for commenting!
I hope to hear more from you.
;)

hey.
i just thought to drop a quick line of thanks.
you're absolute impatiences pushes me to write the next chapter it's amazing
and i clearly appreciate it.
thanks heaps
-a
xx

Thankyy for commenting!
And yay for the 7th!

sequel is up! check it out!

=D
thanks for the comment!
Jordan will tell her. Very soon!

ohmygod!
thanks for the comment.
i didnt think anyone would look at it yet :)

gosh i know...
I can't belive it either.
i look forward to next season too.
but it seemed to me, the wings threw the game cvause you don't go from wining 5-0 on home iced to losing on the next home ice game.
at least I think that way

Thank youu so much for the comments on my story[:
I really appreciate it.

thanks for the story comment!

lol(:

I promise to make her nice in the end. I don't want any angry readers xD

yea, that would suck. if you spent this time reading story and it's sequel, just to end up hating the girl in the end.

well, you'll find out later on why she's acting like this, then maybe you won't hate her so much xD though, I could be wrong, you could still hate her, I don't know.

yea, she doesn't have many fans at the moment.

thank you(:

and, trust me, you're not the only one whose not liking her at the moment.

im sorry for my pointless and retarded rambling.

thank you.
i thought it was getting too mushy and boring [i'm not a mushy and boring person, obviously] i thought i'd spice it up by, yet again, making nic look like the biggest bitch to ever walk the earth. it'll be a happy ending, though that ending is far away, can't give you any clues on how happy or who will be together in the end,but it will be happy. mostly because tragedies make me depressed and I don't feel like writing a sequel to the sequel. that'd just be ridiculous.