lol XD I've actually done that a few times when I'm writing but I've always read over it and fixed it up, guess i missed that one :S
And I love non-silent readers hahaha :)
Holy moly!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you so so so so so so so so so so so much for pointing that out.
I am seriously forever in your debt :) Yes Grace is another character but she's from my other story D: *goes and hides in a hole from embarrassment*
but thank you for the comment and I'm glad that you like the story :)
God, I used to pull characters from my imagination, but I've learned that there will always be something slightly off about them if you base them entirely off something fictional. I'm glad my experiences paid off and that you are impressed by my characterization- it's one thing I really enjoy about writing, and developing characters is one of my favourite pass times.
I'm not choked about not having the high school experience. I had a damn good time doing what I did, and I've never been one for cliche anyway. I live in Canada, and I perhaps go to the most American high school in my area, complete with sr. and jr. varsity football teams, cheerleaders, and stereotypes. School was never a big part of my life after the age of twelve.
I try my best to be carefree while I can. I figure life is out there just waiting for me to live, why don't I? For all I know, I could die tomorrow. I'd rather die happy knowing I did something I enjoyed in my life than die knowing I spent my entire life working toward something I never achieved.
haha basically Jaxon pushed Jay sideways. Usually when you trip, you accidently push them away, hardly ever behind you. :3
Thanks for your comment, btw ^^
thanks for all your story comments :) im gonna reply to each one separately haha
when in venice - thank you! it's nearly finished now tho :'( but im glad you like it so much!! and yeah, john's a bastard.
my pride, my shame - i do know that guys can't actually get pregnant, obviously. but iv read loads of stories where the guy gets pregnant and decided to attempt it myself. freddie isn't anything but 100% boy, its not meant to be plausible in real life. if you google mpreg, you'll find loads of stuff that involves guys getting pregnant - its quite a popular topic to write about in slash stories.
do you hear me scream - thanks, the story is definitely going to continue, we've got loads of ideas for it :) but yeah, rider is an asshole (at the moment :P)
again, thanks for all the comments, im glad you like my stories :D
Ahhh! Thank you so much for leaving such a lengthy comment on my story :) It means so much to me, seriously. I'm glad you liked it and went through the effort of writing things down as you went so you didn't forget anything. So, here's a lengthy comment to respond to yours!
Robyn wasn't healthy for Kodi in my opinion. In a sense, I based Kodi's character off myself, and I had a best friend like Robyn for a long time. Even though he wasn't directly involved in the music scene, he did hard drugs, and drank his life away. He didn't die, but he changed so much that to me, he may as well be dead. This story is a big part of my life, and how I felt going through what I did a few years back. It took me a long time to let go. I made Robyn leave a note as an affirmation. I wanted to tie everything together. I wanted Robyn to end, because Kodi needed closure. If Robyn just overdosed like some other generic junkie, he wouldn't have been Robyn.
Thought that might interest you.
I'm glad you adore Terminal Filth. :) While I don't think my writing is exactly up to par, I'm quite fond of the plotline I've conjured, and even more so fond of all the positive feedback I've received. I feel like I could easily rewrite it and fix all the plotholes I've created, or the chapters where nothing happens, but I'm going to try and finish it first before I do that.
I'm glad I made you laugh. I'm not a generally funny person (not in my opinion anyway), and I appreciate it.
This story isn't bullshit high school stuff, because in truth, I never got to experience that stuff myself. I never had my first date, or first kiss, or any of that shit in high school. I didn't go to my prom or grad, and I most certainly didn't become friends with the guys from the football team, or the outcasts... whatever, right? I was too busy out there, living my life, and trying to get around the music scene. I went out to shows and would skip days at a time to hang out in the city. Like Kodi. And well... I do quite adore Mac as well.
Oh, I love those tats too... the story about the heartagram tattoo is true. That is the real reason he got it. I just added the last part for kicks. ;) He actually has both his nipples pierced now, hahaha. He got one of the piercings ripped out at a show, and he got it repierced not too long ago. Ouch. Haha.
Kodi needs to move on. He spent so long living day to day that clinging to the past for so long is uncharacteristic of him. He needed to move on. I was getting really sick of him whining about Robyn, and there wasn't nearly enough Mac in the story.
...yeah, and I like your reaction haha. XD Yeah, Mac's kind of pretty fucked up. Don't worry. The next chapter is written and ready to go. If I don't get my ass handed to me or go out partying after this black metal show I'm going to tonight, I'll post it later. :)