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I understand how that is. ^_^ Take your time. Don't rush it.

no... I mean your new story... I thin the personage needs to be more human... for example if it's a situation of life or death she should be at least a little scared... maybe she docen't show it but still... there must be something

wooow... I have re-read what I wrote... and it's horrible... the grammar is awefulll... so just ignore it ... please? xD

owww new hair cut??... definetly better than the other
well actually I think that it's a good idea... but the personaje not seems to be human... people have felling... some times we are afraid ... not always so brabe... I think your personaje can be more real... how would you feel in a situation like that??... know what i mean??

Your story rocks so it is no problem =]] Im looking forward to your next update :P BRING IT ON XDXD xx

hey. go see my profile! I put your story on there!

I couldn't help it! lol That's what walked into my head at the moment. xP When I was little I used to say I wanted to 'train' my brother to play baseball and my dad would constantly remind me he's not my 'pet' lol
Yay! Update =D x

^^ No problem.. ill look forward to your updates on them.. Ill read your vamp ones in a bit and leave you a comment =]] xx

Awww =[[ Owkay then... Ill have a read of your vamp. ones... But will you ever finnish the 'A Whole New Life (and Death)' ?? x

Hahahah I look funny?
I think it's just the fact that the sun is like shining through my teeth haha.

Hey, I just wanted to tell you that I think your Vampire story is coming along great! Can't wait for the next update.

HURRY UP!!! I want to read!!!

I know what you mean, but at least you have a genral idea on where your story is going. Most of mine have no long term plan

Well, you deserve to be complimented ^^
It's a really good story and it's a new idea.
I can't for Ch.6 =]=]
Im going to bother you by commenting on every chapter x]

It's really good and I can't wait till you update! =]=] x

anytime! I love reading stories like yours!

actually is him ^^
Gabriel Garcia Marques is a him hahahahhaha
well I didn't expected you to... It's kind of the best writters in spanish... but I don't know if in english
I don't like writing about vampires a lot because of... well... I'd like use my imagination and do something diferent... I mean everybody is writting about vampires... but it docen't meand that you should stop your story... I've read the first two chapters

haha, no problem. glad to help :)

thank you!! and I do love the story by the way!

hahaha tha't's good. maybe I'll go check it. I really don't like writting vampire stories... It just docen't fit with me... I' have read twilight but I0m most into other books... I don't think you have read tthis because is more popular in spanish... a hundred years of solitude ... from mario vargas llosa... I don't know if the traduction is good but I really loved that book