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Yup I know I wrote it in the seventh grade and honestly just a filler but most of the characters are based off of people I know. So Stacey really does exist and we really do hate each others guts. But here's the thing I've got a habit of doing I'll write a super duper suckish story just because the plots stuck in my head. Sorry you don't like it but the first chapters just kindof a recape almost.

thanks for responding to my journal...i dont know what im gonna do...cuz i dont think shes a very good friend...and is it bad to say that i wish she would move? cuz she wants to move out of her grandparents house =/

hey.
i'm ryan
kinda new here.
and the comments that i have been getting are mad

yeah, I don't think anyone would read it either.

Sorry you don't enjoy. Can't please everyone, I guess. Personally I would like to think it's original and it moves at a pretty decent pace, but let's agree to disagree.

Hey! Thanks for the story comment, yes the perfect Edward cullen boy REALLY gets on my nerves. I would like to know which minor details are off. If you could help me out. I would like to know how to improve! Thanks!
_CORRI_

No, but I saw it at Borders and I want - no, NEED - to get it!

by the way, you may like:
http://www.chroniclebooks.com/index/main,book-info/store,books/products_id,7847/title,Pride-and-Prejudice-and-Zombies/

I'm so pumped for this.

hahaha I know, right?
Yay Zombies!

I'm very sorry to hear you did not enjoy my story--not to your taste, I suppose. I know it is FAR from perfect (nowhere even close, actually), and I most definitely have never termed it "phenomenal." But if you do find it dull, I do hope you'll seek other reading material. It is certainly not my intention to bore anyone.

Thank you for the story comment; feedback and suggestions on improvement are always appreciated. :]

I completely agree with you, I thought the same thing a while ago actually but, honestly Noises From Above doesn't matter to me as much as some of other stories, it was just something, that popped into my head.
"Hey, wouldn't be really weird if there was a guy living in your attack that was hot and amazing?"
That's what I thought, and so I was just like whatever I'm gonna wing it, and it was my first story on here. But I do agree with what you said, that's why I was afraid that the story was too predictable, but whatevs.
It's just a happy-go-lucky story, and sort of fairytale-ish and think some people need that right now, y'know?
Anyway, thanks for the comment. :D

Oh...Is HICCUP one of those stories? -is worried-
But thanks for the comment :)

I wrote an entire paper on Alchemy for my english class a few years ago...it was hard to understand, but I like the concept.
And I also like to Wikipedia things I don't know about, which was how I discovered the Visions of Zosimos.

Thanks for the story comment, by the way! :)

um, thank you for sharing my awesome interest in hot superheroes

ha me too
too bad i haven't planned it out yet :/
well. it shall be interesting

You mean Treasure Island?

Yeah, grr... I'm sorry it took me so long to reply and I'm currently working on an update. Writer's block and school starting up again kinda threw me out there.

Thanks :)

hey thanks for the compliment. and dont worry, i'll keep writing: its what i do!