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Haha good, it's hard to explain. You're welcome =)

Yup, I'm positive. Like for example, you could say 'we lay down on the grass and watched the stars' which would be past tense, or 'we lie down on the grass and watch the stars' which would be present tense. It's an irregular verb, and because you are saying you rest/decline on the ground you use the word lay.
Lay would be present tense if you were referring to an object/putting something down.
It's a rather long-winded explanation but I hope it makes sense?

It would still be in past tense. The present tense of lay is lie. It's confusing but, I'm sure it's right =)

Your welcome! It's a good story =]

I'll update it soon, but first I must go back and fix all my errors. I've got the next chapter half way written out, but I'll need a few more days.

You don't really sound bitchy. I want to make the layout so people can read it. How's that?

I just changed the layout, if you want to take a look and see how it looks.

Oh, okay. That helps so much more! I was so confused and I nearly just made a new layout.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I am a tiny bit confused on how the layout is unreadable, but I will change it soon. I will also proof read it and fix any errors, thanks!

Thank you for the comment on my story :) I'm glad you saw it that way because I tried to utilize the "boring" part of his day to add to the story, despite being a bit cliche xD

The layout got deleted when we made the transfer over to New Mibba, so I am in the process of finding someone to make me a new layout for the story as I know how it can impact readers.

Thank you for the comment, made my day :)

Awww... your comment really made my day. Thank you. ^_^

Thank you for the comment on my story 7 Days. It really means a lot to me and I'm glad you like it. ^_^

Aw, it's ok, I understand, I have my finals too, in like, two weeks? Ugh.
Hope you'll succeed! :3 Take your time, I can't myself find teh time to write, so really it's understandable hah! :D

Eh, I already took my exams though. Aha.
And I'm fine, just being lazy at home. ^^

So, how are you? ^^

Well then he looks exceptionally snazzy in that picture. xD

Nice picture of Frankie for your icon though. c:
I must say, he is looking very snazzy. ^^'

Thank you very much for taking the time to comment and read "Captured". c:
It means a lot to me. ^^

Well, right now it's 3:30pm so... I'm guessing it's pretty late right now, xD

You're welcome! Is it day over there in Norway? Cos right now, it's pretty much 10 pm and dark in San Francisco.