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We're Pretending (100)

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thank you!

February 1st, 2009 at 04:49pm

lyrical findings (100)

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^^
You're welcome.

January 28th, 2009 at 12:55am

lyrical findings (100)

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Thanks for the comment on my poem. =]

January 23rd, 2009 at 02:23am

Seize-The-Day (100)

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thanks for the commen on my poem! =]

January 21st, 2009 at 10:40pm

Stargazer5781 (100)

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Laura is the most talented girl/woman/tree on Earth. K :-)

January 21st, 2009 at 10:02pm

controllinginsanity (100)

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no prob. ^_^

January 20th, 2009 at 09:59pm

controllinginsanity (100)

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yay! your writing is so good, i just can't explain it!
You really capture the emotion that poems and other writing pieces should have. =D

January 18th, 2009 at 07:03pm

We're Pretending (100)

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no problem

January 15th, 2009 at 03:59am

desertplaces16 (100)

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thanks for the poem comment ( :
i like your writing.

January 12th, 2009 at 07:45pm

hello.fascination (100)

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your welcome

October 9th, 2008 at 10:43pm

Taedara (100)

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he he yeah thats true. one of my friends told me i looked like the grudge the other day when i got out the shower. how ruude! lol

October 1st, 2008 at 08:44pm

Taedara (100)

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hey no problem! happy to be useful lol (bloody hell, i soundlike im from an asda ad lmao)

October 1st, 2008 at 08:31pm

red square (100)

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Thanks for the poem comments.
=D

September 28th, 2008 at 07:08pm

Carver Edlund (350)

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Thank you so much for the poem comment.
xxx
Horrorpheliac.

September 25th, 2008 at 05:04pm

chromatography. (255)

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Thank for the comment on my poem.

I appreciate the constructive criticism. I dunno, it's been years since I've written it so I might take it into mind next time. 14 year olds definitely don't think the same as 17 year olds!

September 8th, 2008 at 09:13am

Theresa (100)

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Thanks forr tehe comment! It totally made my day=D

September 8th, 2008 at 02:27am

gone coastal. (100)

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hey thanks for ur comment! i took ur suggestion i think it reads a little better now....

September 7th, 2008 at 10:02pm

Dorian (100)

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Thank you darling., I will ^^

August 24th, 2008 at 06:16pm

WheresxYourxHeart (100)

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The dove is a symbol of peace and LOVE which the poem is about. I also don't usually try to rhyme at all, it just happens that way, so yeah... It's my feelings, not just some imagery cooked together for the hell of it. (I'm not being angry, just defending my case. This isn't a poem meant for an English class and analyzing literature, it's the fucked-up beating heart of a teen-aged girl). I do respect that you bothered to comment though. Thank you for that. I just don't plan out my poems, they come from my heart. It's not meant to follow a frame or guideline.

August 19th, 2008 at 05:22am

WheresxYourxHeart (100)

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Actually.. I've edited now which makes your advice even more awesome since it allowed me to do that. You motivated me XD The second stanza is all new and spiffy now if you want to bother re-reading it.

August 19th, 2008 at 04:51am