xangelbabi72x / Comments

thank you!

^^
You're welcome.

Thanks for the comment on my poem. =]

thanks for the commen on my poem! =]

Laura is the most talented girl/woman/tree on Earth. K :-)

no prob. ^_^

yay! your writing is so good, i just can't explain it!
You really capture the emotion that poems and other writing pieces should have. =D

no problem

thanks for the poem comment ( :
i like your writing.

your welcome

he he yeah thats true. one of my friends told me i looked like the grudge the other day when i got out the shower. how ruude! lol

hey no problem! happy to be useful lol (bloody hell, i soundlike im from an asda ad lmao)

Thanks for the poem comments.
=D

Thank you so much for the poem comment.
xxx
Horrorpheliac.

Thank for the comment on my poem.

I appreciate the constructive criticism. I dunno, it's been years since I've written it so I might take it into mind next time. 14 year olds definitely don't think the same as 17 year olds!

Thanks forr tehe comment! It totally made my day=D

hey thanks for ur comment! i took ur suggestion i think it reads a little better now....

Thank you darling., I will ^^

The dove is a symbol of peace and LOVE which the poem is about. I also don't usually try to rhyme at all, it just happens that way, so yeah... It's my feelings, not just some imagery cooked together for the hell of it. (I'm not being angry, just defending my case. This isn't a poem meant for an English class and analyzing literature, it's the fucked-up beating heart of a teen-aged girl). I do respect that you bothered to comment though. Thank you for that. I just don't plan out my poems, they come from my heart. It's not meant to follow a frame or guideline.

Actually.. I've edited now which makes your advice even more awesome since it allowed me to do that. You motivated me XD The second stanza is all new and spiffy now if you want to bother re-reading it.