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  • Hero

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    That's awesome! I am a creative writing major in college, and editing is definitely a huge part of our classes and everything. I have definitely gotten a lot better at it since starting. Haha
    May 31st, 2009 at 09:36pm
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    Yay!!! I love comments!! And don't worry, I am writing the update as we speak :-)

    You should definitely re-post your story. My friend Mj does that alot. After she finishes her stories, she takes them down and then re-posts them slowly. She gets a whole new wave of readers. It's a pretty genius idea. Lol.
    May 31st, 2009 at 09:03pm
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    Thanks so much for your comment on my story!! I love getting new readers, and I am so glad to hear it's your favorite story. I update at least once a day, so don't worry, you will always have new chapters to read. :-)
    May 31st, 2009 at 08:15pm
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    Hahah, pretty much.. just working. I'm probably taking classes this summer too... or I might just end up dropping my classes and working two jobs to save up money... which I desperately need to do. Bahh
    I hope the rest of your school time passes quickly for you :)
    May 25th, 2009 at 07:25pm
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    BAM.
    What's up?
    I finished school today :)
    Be excited.
    I am.
    May 20th, 2009 at 06:15am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Thank you :)
    They'll definitely be named, it is such a huge part of the story. But the issue with that is if I had done shorter chapters, then I would have to split the name so like "Song In My Head pt.1 ;; Song In My Head pt. 2.." I might still have to do that on some of the reallyyyyy long parts.

    Ahhh my bad.. at least I knew that MAX was public transportation! :D Ahh I have only seen a couple famous rappers.. no Gereen Day yet :P But I'll keep that in mind! Hahaah
    May 8th, 2009 at 05:25pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    That is one of the reasons why I love your story so much.. it's not like other stories where the girl is just headoverheals from the beginning.. I love seeing it kind of be the other way around, but having so many difficulties with the relationship, like Austin.

    Yeah, I'm the same way, I love coming up with random stuff. But often times, I will go through my story and change and add stuff as I post it. And for this new one, since I am planning it a lot more, I will have just the basic outline written, but chances are, as my mood changes when I post each part, I will do re-writes and add stuff, or change stuff. The only thing about setting it up that is giving me issues though is the fact that there are only 16 "parts" to the story, but each part covers a loooooot of stuff, but each part also directly relates to ONE song. So I dunno whether I should split them up and name each chapter by song title and then write part 1, part 2, etc. so that I don't have insanely long chapters, or if I should just go ahead and have really long chapters. I think having long chapters will be better in the long run and for when I publish this elsewhere buuuut IDK. What do you think?
    May 6th, 2009 at 03:59am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Gahhh. I really do need to update. I'm slowly gaining back some inspiration.. I've been looking for a Muse everywhere, and I think I've finally found one (or a couple sources, anyway).

    It just took me a couple weeks to completely shake that feeling I had about Nils after spring break. It wasn't necessarily bad, but I just wasn't in the right mood to write from Molly's perspective, you know? During my little break though, I've also come up with another idea that I am really excited about, but instead of just posting nilly-willy like I always do, I've completely started planning it out, and really composing all the elements BEFORE I start writing instead of just going with a random event/imagining I have had and seeing where it takes me. I want to have most of it written before I even start posting it.. especially because it is going to be a set length, and have kind of a rigid format. I'm excited about it though, and I think you'll like it. It doesn't have any amazing cute celebrities in it or anything, and it isn't going to be my normal style of writing.... but I'm confident about it anyway, haha. (Oh geez, this comment is novel status I think..)

    Anywhooo, yeah I think we covered everything else that was in your comments when we were texting last night, hahah.. but I'm not sure. (PS - You should go to myspace.com/pk and add them if you have a myspace... or reverbnation.com/wearepk and then check out my bidwell at myspace.com/bidwell ... both bands are friends of mine, and i'm actually doing some graphic design work with bidwell right now soooo i'm getting the word out!)
    <3
    May 6th, 2009 at 01:56am
  • cassii

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    Ok so i read your update..amaziiiiinnngggg!
    i loved it no joke.
    I'm the most legit person in your story now hahahaha.
    Jk jk but i loveeeed it.
    May 4th, 2009 at 10:37pm
  • Cass33

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    Your story is amaziiiiiing.
    I love it.
    Its addicting write some moreeee.
    April 8th, 2009 at 09:52pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    We alllllll could use a little more Pat Robinson in our lives ;)
    No worries, I have an update coming, slowly but surely. I've been working on it every once in awhile if I can grab a minute or two here or there.

    And yeahhh that song is way amazing. <3

    I haven't talked to like... anyone lately. Even my best friends, it is terrible!! I have been SUPER busy, really sick, and basically everything I complained about last month, is just escalated now. But whatever.. I'm dealing. And starting thursday at noon-ish, I AM DONE for a wholeeee week and then some. Of course, I will have to be working on stuff, but at least I don't have to go anywhere :]

    How are you my dear??
    April 8th, 2009 at 12:36am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    My mom asked me last night if I had updated yet.... hahahahahah.
    Think that maybe that is a sign that it is time I ought to?
    April 4th, 2009 at 11:25pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Hahah i shall watch that!
    :)
    April 2nd, 2009 at 05:44pm
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    awwwe that sucks! you got ripped off.. mine was 17.99 :/
    i feel really bad for telling you that, but you should know! we should write letters and raise hell!!
    where on earth did you get yours??
    April 1st, 2009 at 05:11pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Oh and I agree about james and victoria! That hella freaked me out!!!
    I think it is funny that Stephenie made Catherine change the kiss scene. Even still it is tooooo much, so I would have hated to see what she had beforehand.
    March 30th, 2009 at 07:32pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Yeah yeah yeahhhh. It's on the third disc. (Apparently I am one of the few people that have the third disc...? None of my friends knew what I was talking about either)
    Yeah..rob's hand is just... i can't say. it'll give stuff away. But yeah, you should try to track down that bonus feature :)
    March 30th, 2009 at 07:31pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    I updated :) GO ME! hahah
    you will likeeee it you little mind reader, you ;)
    March 18th, 2009 at 12:12am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    she plays the lady that is trying to break up the sorority... the old hag in the black suit that is like screeching at the end at the hearing... hahahh
    March 9th, 2009 at 07:04am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Hahaha i loved that movie, other than the fact that Beverly D'Angelo was in it. (I despise that woman... and for very good reason!)

    Tyson was adorable in that movie, and so was Colin Hanks... mmm he is such a babe. hahah

    Oh, and I got the link from the picture, but it says it is private :(
    March 6th, 2009 at 07:56am
  • KelseyImpag.

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    Thank you! I may take that idea and have her play Gianna!
    March 2nd, 2009 at 02:42am