NYC.ShelbyMarie / Comments

Oh, trust me, Amira isn't anywhere near finished with Killian. That was simply sticking the knife into him - now she's going to have fun twisting it.

If you like seeing Emma pissed off, you're going to enjoy the next few chapters - because that is going to be Amira's goal whenever she's around her. So if you're finding Amira to be entertaining, you're going to like what I have up next.

You're going to find out why Killian left all those years ago, but you have to wait for it. It will come out before they go save Henry, I promise. Up next, Amira and Killian are finally going to talk - like actually exchange words with one another rather than Amira just staring at him in shock. And of course there is an awkward situation that Amira finds herself in.

But I'm so glad to hear that you liked the first chapter! Killian won't be in the next chapter [unfortunately] but he should be around starting chapter three. Up next, Amira is going to find out that Killian is back in Neverland and will see him from afar.

So she doesn't exactly backhand him, but she doesn't walk away without making her presence known....

But don't worry, Pan and Amira's time together is going to set the stage for them both to twist the knife in Killian's back once they all come face to face together.

@ Your.Desi.Girl

Ahhh so nervous to see how this all plays out!

I'm trying to make him amazing for you... and I'm happy to know that it's working!

As much as I don't want to get rid of Bae, I have to. I'm already bending the script so it fits for this; I can't completely disregard the show's storyline like that... even thought I kinda wish I could...

But Amira will see Bae again, don't worry. And that will all be because of Killian breaking his promise(s) to her... but it has to happen, otherwise there would be no sequel!

Up next, Bae ends up leaving with the Lost Boys [as per the show] and Amira gets to meet the "King" of Neverland. Then Killian explains why he gave up Bae to Pan. I'll get more up most likely tomorrow!

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Alwayssssss approve of the fluff hahah makes the story so much better! Especially because they have so much sexual tension lol.

I don't blame Bae for being protective, I would be too. Sequel? Ah that's exciting!

I'll patiently wait for their moment then! Hahah

Looking forward to the update! Totally understand, the working life sucks =x

So happy to hear that you approved of the fluff!

And yes, Bae is being very protective of her, but can you blame him? He was told that a pirate killed his mother and that they can't be trusted, etc.... but that's all leading up to what's going to be the sequel to this. All of Bae's warnings are kind of like a foreshadowing, even though he won't be the one saying, "I told you so" when it does happen.

And they will get their moment... it's just going to take a while to get it.

But I feel all warm and fuzzy inside knowing that you like my writing so much!

Up next, he asks Amira for advice when Bae tells him about his dad being the Dark One and how the dagger is the key to killing him, as well as Bae finding the picture of Milah and wanting off the ship [basically what happened in And Straight On 'Til Morning] I'll try to get it up soon, most likely Sunday, since that's my next day off.

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Read past the first chapter? I was hooked! ( Pun kinda intended ) I read until I got to the last chapter! I really love the way you write as well, pure amazingness! Also, I read the update and commented =)

Well hi! First off, I'm super stoked that you checked out my story, then found it good enough to read past the first chapter! I'm so happy to hear that you're enjoying it so much! I'm going to try to get an update up later this afternoon/evening, so keep an eye out for it!

Thanks so much for your comment on Anything Can Happen. New update tonight I think.

thank you so much for the comment on SWMYKYHTBOM
and it was so sweet of you for saying that everyone who unsubscribed were missing out! means a lot to me!
glad you liked it! and yes Haters Gonna Hate x)

thank you for the very sweet comment! i'm working on an update right now!

Thanks again for your comment on Like A Star. I'm so glad you love the story.

Thanks for your comment on my story. I'm glad you like it! :-)

Thanks so much for the friend request!

Thank you so much for reading my Zach story. I'm so glad you liked it. I am sure there will be another Zach story, cuz he's Zach and because I adore him. If you have time check out some of my other stories. I'd love to get your opinion on those too.

Thanks for the comment on Start Living Now! Sorry I haven't update in a bit, college life (more like homework) had been taking over my life!!! lol expect an update this week!

thanks for the comment on [i]Right Around The Corner[/i]!
Im real glad you're liking it (:

Nice what did you watch?

heyyy what is up?

thank you on both accounts