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  • Vic is a Turtle.

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    sweeeet : D

    and oh my thank you. i'm rather fetished for gabe saporta right now. man he's a hot peice of ass. *zones out for a moment* mmhh that boy is fine. nice ass, too.

    anyway, bahaha, that might have been it. i'm a bit of a spiderman fan for sure. totally kicks supermans ass. i mean spider man can fuckign shoot webs out of his FINGERS! superman is just a beefcake in spandex with his underwear on the wrong side of his costume.


    and i can't believe you've never watched friends. i have like the full dvd set of like every season because me and my mom love them. it's so funny.


    and i would love to cowrite a story. i've never done that before and i think it would be easier than doing one all by yourself. maybe i should get your AIM so we can discuss these story ideas further, yah? (yah bitch yah! - fuck i hate soulja boy. haha.)

    and yes! i want to write another original story too! we can be cool and write like .. two at the same time. dear god i'm feeling wild today. hahah.
    September 1st, 2008 at 05:28pm
  • Vic is a Turtle.

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    let's find someone to make us an account! haha. what do you want to do first? i kinda have an idea for a story. it's based off this episode of friends i saw when joey and pheobe were setting eachother up with people and pheobe found someone for joey but joey didn't find anyone for pheobe so he found some random guy to bring along and pretended that they were good friends and then pheobe found out and got mad and then mike found her and apologized and they ended up getting married at the end of the season : D

    i like that idea. and i was also thinking for some reason, about a scene where a bus is moving with the girl inside and it's all cramped and the dude is likke running alongside the bus with all these bags and papers and he's like 'wait! wait for me!' and he's like falling over and shit and eventually he gets inside the bus and sits with the girl. i was jogging and for some reason i couldn't stop thinking about that. maybe it was from a movie or something...
    September 1st, 2008 at 12:26pm
  • brucepayne

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    Rofl.
    Well the sequel will be blindingly amazing then because...duh...you're writing it!

    -laughs-

    Btw did you check out that girl's page?
    The one being grrish?
    September 1st, 2008 at 12:02am
  • brucepayne

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    Awesome. I can't wait.
    I was planning on doing that for the Gabe story but temptation was too strong. =]
    All my other stories have been put on hold -chuckles-
    August 31st, 2008 at 11:08pm
  • DmK

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    Yea...
    It's great you finished it.
    August 31st, 2008 at 10:54pm
  • brucepayne

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    People are poop.

    And yes it was worth it.
    -chuckles-
    I felt like I had accomplished something too which rocked.
    Part 3 hopefully tomorrow.

    So any news on your sequel?
    August 31st, 2008 at 10:49pm
  • DmK

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    honey, im not upset with it. i loved the story. but you have to realize that even with a sequel you could lose readers based on the last ending of a story. i'm not critisizing you; i'm trying to give you some feedback. in life you don't just get positive feedback and when you get one that says you did something a little wrong you don't just go, "LA-DI-DA, that one opinion doesn't matter even if some other people think it too."
    August 31st, 2008 at 10:43pm
  • brucepayne

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    How freaking dare they?
    Constructive critism[sp?] is fine yeah but that is kind of cold.
    Well I LOVED the ending
    -sticksupchin-
    So there.

    And thanks. The update was kinda hard to write though.
    -chuckles-
    August 31st, 2008 at 10:38pm
  • DmK

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    Kay, cus no offense but as a writer too I just have to say that the ending was horrible. I'm just saying it because it seems like you were in a rush to finish it and you got bored.
    August 31st, 2008 at 07:40pm
  • brucepayne

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    ahaha.
    Well I've updated now.
    And temptation????

    so like a little voice going 'do it! do it!' in a creepy tone?

    Yeah...that's not me...
    -cough-
    August 31st, 2008 at 01:45pm
  • Vic is a Turtle.

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    dude! i know! when they started saying they would change it i was like nah i'm not leaving dude i'm too comfortable i have friends here and shit and then i was like, idiot, to whoever moved over to mibba but then i did it. haha.

    i didn't word that very well but yknow, i'm kinda sleepy. haha.


    i made new emails and used old ones and shit because i used to get banned all the time so i stopped making new accounts and my friend gave me her old one. so to be safe we should find some other kid who doesn't use mibba to make it for us : ]

    what would be the first thing we did on that account? is it to write stories and stuff or is it just for the sake of having a joint account? either way is cool with me :)
    We could find someone or we could always make a new email with google or something. I have some old email addresses too.
    August 31st, 2008 at 12:55pm
  • DmK

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    Are you serious? That can't be the ending to Sparkle, Baby, Shine. C'mon. You have to write a sequel or something. That just can't be the ending.
    August 31st, 2008 at 06:47am
  • JustKarie

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    both your stories > life

    i swear their amazingg<3
    i love sparkle baby shinee
    August 31st, 2008 at 06:17am
  • NatalieNarcotic;

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    lol. okayy, but i'm gonna feel like a loser >.<
    August 31st, 2008 at 01:04am
  • NatalieNarcotic;

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    haha ok.
    can i ask you how you do co-authors, my friend and i might do it, so how can i do that on the story page?
    August 31st, 2008 at 12:49am
  • brucepayne

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    I was thinking you do Alexa's P.O.V (for ovi reasons lol) and I do alex's.
    And for co-author-ing = i make the story page and add you as a co-writer that way you update when you want and i can too.
    also we can keep track via comments or (if you've got msn) msn.
    add me if you have msn:
    chelsiecatastrophe@hotmail.co.uk

    sorry but i've got to go. dad's switching the internet off -chuckles-
    speak tomorrow and expect and update!
    August 31st, 2008 at 12:30am
  • brucepayne

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    Ideekay.
    =[
    I've never done co-writing before
    -nervouschuckle-
    August 31st, 2008 at 12:19am
  • brucepayne

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    -sigh-
    christmas...

    well hopefully tomorrow!!!!!!
    i'm just trying to decide exactly how the date should go and what should happen.
    i was also thinking, when alex and you arrive in the story (around three chapters from now) we should start the prequel thingy =]
    what do you think?
    August 31st, 2008 at 12:05am
  • brucepayne

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    wow.
    that was my first thought when i saw it.
    lol to the boner =]

    i really really really want some nike dunks =[
    i want ones like gabe saporta has =D
    August 30th, 2008 at 11:54pm
  • brucepayne

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    I know.
    -astonishedlook-
    It was...amazing.
    I honestly can not wait for the sequal!

    I saw a link for my page on your page and I was like
    "No. Freaking. Way. This girl is too cool."
    So I put a link for you on mine!
    -grins-
    August 30th, 2008 at 11:02pm