I don't think adorable is childish at all! And that's kind of what I shoot for in my one-shots, haha they're not supposed to be anything grand or exciting. Just cute. :)
I'm glad you liked it though! And I didn't mind the added incredible and beautiful either, in case you were wondering. Thanks for brightening my rainy day!
It has been FOREVER, but I finally updated my Alex Gaskarth story "P.S. I Don't Love you."
:) I hope you read, and I'm sorry for not updating in such a long time x.x