Anonymous_Authoress / Comments

Hi, how are you doing?

Thank you for the comment! I really appreciate it. I've hit a block on it (even decided to rewrite it!) and I don't want to rush the process and have it turn into crap.

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You're welcome. I love your stories!

Hi there! I just wanted to come by and say thanks for recommending my stories Call It Off and Shell Games. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked them. :)

Hello

Thank you so much for the feedback on my story. It's nice to see someone comment some criticism without being a total asshole. :) I will definitely work on the minor problems you have told me about.

Hello there! As we all know, Mibba crashed and a lot of data was lost. I visited your profile, according to my browser history, and I think I left a comment regarding my story, Beginning of Something. I'm not sure if you've checked it out yet, but if you've already seen it and had subscribed to it, please do me the favor of subscribing and commenting again. Also, if you have not taken a look at it, I'll appreciate it if you do. I'm terribly sorry for the inconvenience. Thank you! (｡’▽’｡)♡ http://stories.mibba.com/read/451181/Beginning-of-Something/

:) Thank you.

I'll take your comment into heavy consideration when I write Invisible 2.0

Good job with the comment, you made my sista happy!! ^_^ (the person below.) hehe

Omg!!(I never say that) Thank you an extreme amount for the comment!!! You have totally made my day:D

Awesome! And I work and go to college, so I know what you mean. Uh, my story idea is called The Illusive Pheonix and I have a prolouge up so that might give you an idea. After reading that ask me any questions cuz I'm lazy right now and don't want to type it all out, lol

You have a point with the cliches, but why is reading something and wanting to be perfect so bad? We all know that we're flawed, but there are times where we just want to be perfect and whole, so that's why I write cliches and leave my characters a bit underdeveloped. So that the readers can add atributes that they like and have the idea of being perfect in a worl of flaws.

And I don't updat only because I get comments. Whether or not I have a comment I will update when I can. I just put it out there to see what kind of responses I get.

And I love that you're being completly truthful, which is what I want.

I love when my stories have a variety of responses, it makes me feel like I was able to accomplish something, even if the reader hated it.

At least I have one truthful reader : )

So that's why I write the way I do. I'm not a good writer, I'm not even thinking of writing as a future. I'm just writing now as a hobby, one that I enjoy, even if my stories aren't entertaining.

So I really appreciate your input, it makes me think things through.

And I really would like help with my next story since I think I have a really good idea, but not a lot to go with.

Thanks for the comment! I actually made it to be a cliche. To me there are stories about true life, than there are cliches. Even the examples of making Nevaeh have a short fuse or a klutz or even a prankster are cliches. We live our entire lives as one big cliche and when we (I) write it's based off of life. An example is that the lead character is a heavy set girl who wants to be skinny, have a boyfriend, and feel beautiful. That's a cliche based off of life. The awesome thing about stories is that you get to emphazise the cliches as you read or write so that you can take a break from your own cliches. I'll be the first person to tell you that my writing sucks and isn't perfect, but that's okay because somewhere out there someone is reading my chapters of cliches and is able to take a break from the stresses of their life. I hope you aren't upset with me and if you want you can help me build a better character with my next story. If not, that's okay because at some time you'll find a story of cliches that you can relate to.

Hello = ]
I just wanted to let you know that the results for my "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" contest are up.
If you need a link to the contest please let me know.

@Anonymous Authoress: Great! Your feedback is just what I needed. ^^ I appreciate you taking your time to read this story and point out my mistakes.

Well, yes, the tyre thing. In my country, we follow British English so it's spelt as tyre over here. It's equivilant to tire in American English.

Other than that, I'm glad you gave me your honest opinions so I could improve.

Hello. I've seen you commenting contructively for some stories before. So I was wondering if you could check out one of my story, and give me your feedback. ^^

http://stories.mibba.com/read/225428/He-Caught-My-Eye/

Haha, thanks for the comment!
& Her getting with Skyler is nowhere near my intention.
*evil laugh*
Love love your comment. xD

Thanks for the criticism.

Not a problem at all!
To me this whole site is really to get peoples opinions on my writing.
I hope one day to be a writer. so its good when people give me suggestions, and tell me when it could be better :)

So thank you.

Haha, you pretty much are the only one giving me suggestions.
At least you did as i asked :)
lol.