i thought it wsa lovely. i commented XD
haha that's what all writers do. [i]always[/i]editing and rewriting to improve it. i rewrite mine all the time which is one reason why it takes me longer than necessarry to update. =D
i appreciate your offer and your help.
sorry if i offended you.
and my social life is going well i guess.
my friends and i are actually supposed to be going to the beach later tonight and have a bonfire.
it's one of our little rituals we have.
how is your's?