It better be or I'll come after you with a carving knife!
I love it! The twists and turns especially at the start with the whole third cousin thing works well with the story so their affections and antics are explained.
Also Dana taking a jealous approach is very different from the cliche 'Oh well you're my best friend so I'll let you have him' routine. Its well-written. Did you use spell-check?
I sure hope so!
Thats why I like dramatic stories. They can make you laugh,cry and just giggle all in one chapter!
Its like an emotional roller coaster...
I'm gonna go read the other38 chapters now...
I love it! The twists and turns especially at the start with the whole third cousin thing works well with the story so their affections and antics are explained.
Also Dana taking a jealous approach is very different from the cliche 'Oh well you're my best friend so I'll let you have him' routine. Its well-written. Did you use spell-check?
XoXo
Emmy